good story :)

I can not believe how good a writer you are and what an awsome story this is so far...

:( only 3 chapters left...

I'm definatly adding this to my story alerts.

:)

i loved it.i can't wait to see Dumbledore's reaction when he learns that Mr.Granger is the master of Hogwarts.

don't let us wait for next ch. for too long

Nice job, update ASAP, and i hope next time the chapter will be longer.

Why do you persist with this? All your fics have the same cookie-cutter plot and characters, to the point it makes me wonder if your fics all come factory-made or something. You had a few well-written fics, but frankly all your later work reads like the same thing over and over again.

As for the fic itself...well, you've got one hell of a crapsack afterlife that has all the hallmarks of a forced pairing (Soul mate? Is that the best you can come up with? Romantic soap opera drivel that should've died out in the HP fanfiction scene years ago?), plus, well, your utter brutalization of Harry's character. I've never wanted to punch someone as much as I did Harry after what you wrote. Sweet Lord, all of your characters as written in the first chapter alone are complete twits who deserve a good curbstomping to get their heads out of their individual backsides.

Grammarwise, you have a tendency towards run-on sentences.

Rating: Meh.

I know you'll probably end up making an attack on my eligibility as a reviewer (as you did Mundungus90) since I don't have any HP fics on , but I will several inform you that I've authored several one-shots, crack drabbles and a chaptered fic over at TFF, Seel'vor's yahoo group and 3_4 Part Harmony under the names Lord of Bones and Hellishlord.

Thank you Mundungus90 for proving to me you are simply deranged.

You're still a sicko who can't grasp the books and shows ** snuff to her grandkids. What's the point of writing fanfiction if the characters don't resemble the ones you're writing about?

And why would I allow a reply? Like I said, you're sick in the head.

I bet you can't even explain why Hermione is so hateful to her own children. What a horrible mother she is in this story. You've assassinated her character.

I am writing this in reply to the tiny brained idiot who goes under the name of Mundungus90.

This evil little minded cretin who has no work of his/her own posted, and doesn't even have the guts to allow authors to reply to the flames they send out.

So Mundungus90 what is it like to be a stupid brain dead idiot who does not understand what the word fiction means. As you are that stupid I wonder if would truly be worth suggesting you buy a dictionary to help you understand the more simple concepts in life like what the word fiction implies.

This is truly an astounding fic.

So stupid, so willfully ignorant in understanding the characters of Harry, Ron, and Hermione and so completely lacking in any internal logic. If Hermione's children were terrible wouldn't that be her fault as well - she raised them, they share half her DNA. And what kind of mother is she that she dislikes her own children so much? Maybe that's the reason they're so terrible.

Did you ever pause to consider that while fapping over pictures of Dan and Emma?

Have you even *read* the books? Watching the movies isn't the same thing.

You are a truly awful writer.

ah...please update soon...this is really good.

An excellent update I look forward to seeing what comes next.



Hemotem

Ok, I've already read some of your storys, all of them where short finished ones, and I realy liked most of them.
So first of Thanks for those.


Now to this story:

This is an realy intresting idea and I wasn't quite sure if I liked the way you're going at this, since it felt odd with her having such an old mind and beeing in love with an 11 year old.
But since you've eliminated her memorys out of this, that problem was solved.

Hmm making Hermiones dad the owner of hogwarts put a nice twist to the story, so I hope that Minerva is going to have a little place in the next chapters.

What was one of the biggest + points was that you've disposed of Albus without completly overdoing it.

I'm realy looking forward to the next chapter and the rest of the story.

Hope you update soon.

great story please keep up the good work can't wait to find out what happen next please updat soon

Hi,

I want to thank you for the hard work that you have so obviously put into this story.

I hope to come back to it for a second reading in a few months and find more chapters.

All the best as you continue with it.

Old-Crow