Definitely one of my more favorite SI fics. Very well written sir, very well indeed. Thanks for paying homage to the OVA as well, since we all know the tv was complete shite. Havn't finished ch.3 yet, but I'm well on my way and hoping this doesn't end anytime soon.

Another excellent chapter, just long enough to keep you hooked then leave you wanting more :). Can't wait to see what Sylia has cooked up for revenge.

Interesting story.
I'm one of few people that can enjoy SI and this is a good one. I read about the Sexaroids in Pyeknu and Skysaber's fanfiction.
I hope the Anri and Syvie make it this time and if you want to increase the number, the factor is the Dobermans. If those monster boomers weren't activated, alot more of the Sexaroids would have made it.
Hope you write more soon.

Excellent writing, as usual your tales are worth the wait. I found the two twists of chapter 4 to be highly surprising, kudos. You should also be commended for promoting the idea that people should pay attention to PSAs. I was thinking of including a GI Joe reference...but I am certain some other reviewer will do that.

good story but were you trying to make a narcissism joke in this chapter?

This continues to be very good.I have to say think you should give up fan fic and write your own stuff you have the talent evidently .Though that is shooting myself in the face as I think everyone would miss your fanfic.
Cant think of any crictisms.

You, sir, are very likely a god of some type. This is an absolutely amazing story, and it would border on criminal to let it die, to leave it unfinished.
I am, to be perfectly honest, rather appalled that this has received only thirty reviews. The writing is excellent, and you've managed once again to make a self-insert character who not only avoids being a Mary-Sue, but is very much an interesting, likable character.
You, sir, are very likely a deity.

We definately have similar reading lists. I am intrigued by some of your portayals and am looking forward to how you integrated Meg into the crew. Keep the wheel turning.

Solid second chapter. Getting better, really. Question, do you have a beta? Might smooth some things out and help fix the devilish typos problem. Keep the wheel turning.

A good start to a reasonable story. Kind of like some of the angles your playing. And we've obviously read some of the same material. I'm liking the antihero approach. Way too many of us (myself included) have completely unrealistic ideas of what we could and would really do. Congrats for writing (at least as far as I've read) a good SI.

By the by, I will say that you've got nothing on me for living in anti-Megatokyo. I've seldom lived in a city of more than 60 thousand. Usually towns of 2-5 thousand. Tokyo today is over 12 million (5.6 people/m2). Yeah. Right.

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Well I thought it was great.Grenades kill by fragmentation so if your lying down with a boomer infront of you .Probably will live as most fragments will go up or into the boomer acting as a synthmeatsheild .Still be a really bad for you.
Please continue you have great ideas and carry them off well.

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I would like to comment on three things that stood out in this chapter. First, the mental image of Sylia rolling on the ground and laughing is indeede hilarious. Second, the Evangelion reference in the parking garage was great (I'm sure there were probably references to other Animes there too, but none I recognized). Finally, the surprising twist you included for Meg's fate was brilliant. I did not see that coming at all and it was quite original. Bravo for your excellent work.

Awesome chapter. Long, but well worth it.
I like how you've make Meg into a real character, who's not quite up to the tasks before her.

Also, I personally know someone who was a mere 10 feet from a mortar shell exploding, and didn't get a scratch, so I can buy the grenade.