Stupendous (I remembered another word!). Love how you're bringing in the classic 24 plotlines with your own original twist. UD soon!

No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no! Not good, not good, no, no, no. What will they do now?

Sorry, done panicking. Fantastic, love your Jamey/Milo rivalry. The description of the assassin is brilliant. UD soon!

Oh, exciting! Whassit say?

Fantastic, love the build up of tension mixed with humour, and of course, the CTU gossip!

This is truly hilarious! I can just picture the blushing, with the dramatic music in the background... LOL! Great job!

Oh fantastic! How many words for fantastic are there? Look it up in a thesaurus and pretend I put them all in this review. Jack Bauer writing ff for Harry Potter? I CANNOT stop laughing.