How marvelous! The story is well-written, spare and articulate; not a word feels wasted here. And the twist at the end is ENORMOUSLY satisfying. Very nice work!

Wow...I was convinced that it was Erik. You wrote this very well. Are you quite sure that it isn't dearest Erik? It sounds much like him...Hehehe. It's well written and I would love to see more even if it isn't Erik. Hehehe. I'll be waiting...

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Wow, what an awesome surprise ending! I could have sworn it was Erik all along, but I like the idea of Reyer also being in love with Christine. That was a great twist. :D

I also liked all the description in your writing. It really gave a good sense of what was going on. And the way you described Reyer's emotions were amazing! I really felt for him through the whole thing. Overall, this was great! Write more! :D

Wow - that was a complete surprise! Wonderfully written!

Aww - i've always loved that Reyer kiss :-) Loved the twist in the story.

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Well that was unexpected!! Whenever people do a twist i pretty much always pick up on it, but not this time. i did have a tiny suspicion as Erik wasn't in the characters, but i was still positive it was Erik!!