This was written in a way that I wasn't quite expecting. I love how you had each chapter written from a different character's perspective. And the way you handled the newspaper finding Rorschach's journal was amazing as well. The only thing that sort of bothered me about it was how Adrian kept the journal on his bookshelf. I would think that the "smartest man in the world" wouldn't be so careless. But overall, great job!

Laurie is a coward! She must have killed him for this, not destroying the only evedence of his crimes! I hope her perfect world to crumble down!

Amazing.

I loved Rorschach and the Nite Owl...that was very well done. Sad, but wonderful. The rest of the story is very good, don't get me wrong. It's just that part was so very bitter sweet that it really stuck with me.

Again, so sad! :(
Beautifully written,
can't wait for more. :)

Can't wait for Laurie to find out about Dan.

This is really sad. :(
I like the part where Adrian doubts Laurie would be alive to celebrate her birthday, but makes a note of it anyway. It really emphasizes the indifference of is character.
I also like the way you've split each section up into several paragraphs per character, it's an interesting way to read it.
Good work, hope to read more :)

I like the purity of following the novel instead of the movie; looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Sounds like an intriguing start! I can't wait for more-- there needs to be more fics about Adrian.