I like your story. The rest of this is my sugar fuel babbling and encouragement. So feel free to ignore me... Otherwise, my review:

Ooh, you are an evil evil person, not really. But please, please, please, You gotta quit with these clif hangers. Although the speedy updates are nice. Okay its chill. But you CAN NOT stop writing this, except like if your keyboard is stolen by kleptomaniac monkey-rabbits, then I guess you'd have no choice.
But I'm really enjoying this, alot. so, just thought I'd let you know. In case it helps.
M
PS Monkey-rabbits DO steal things, like VCRs(but who cares if they take those?), so watch out! They may look adorable, but they are not.

PPS: I'm not this annoying, really, I just got my computer repaired and feel the need to overuse it. Sorry that you we the first author alert in my inbox.

Oh Eliot... so crazy and possessive and adorable! And poor Colby.. he's just in over his pretty little head.

But kudos to Bri for being determined to make it work! Though really, who could blame her? lol

I'm really liking this story, :D