Finally I finished! (finally being two days. heh) It was really good! I wish there had been more explicit P/O at the end (throughout would've been nice) but that's just me. It was REALLY AMAZING when Olivia and Peter met and made out in the other world place, but i wanted more, lol.
I am a fan :D

... I'm getting antsy.

Awh! My favorite P/O moment in this fic to date!! Subtle, but enough to drive me crazy :P

This is cute... in a really twisted way

You are crazy and torturous. Onward, to the next chapter!

OMFG! this was one HULLUVA chapter!

So, the scene with Rachel? Audacious and brilliant, lol.
And yeah, you have lost your mind, but it's enjoyable :)

AAHAAH! RACHEL! "Liv, what the hell??" And Liv won;t be able to explain, because she can't tell Rach about her work. continuing!

:P Really? Peter is attracted to a pregnant woman? lol, this chapter was sweet and awkward at the same time.

Oh Walter! Made me lol even in the seriousness of this chap. This is really good! I will now keep reading... a sure sign of how much I'm enjoying it!

Ack! What did they do to Olivia?!?

Wow! Wonderful story FC! I wished I'd found it sooner than two days ago! I read the first 24 chapters in an entire night... Finished the last 15 just now... Aw, what a great story this was too... You had me hooked since the beginning...

Thanks for sharing such a great story,

~ZeusFluff~

P.S. Did you intend to write a sequel?

Okay so I started reading this around 8:30 this morning and couldnt pull myself away for longer than 10 minutes at a time! It is now 5:00 and I just finished. I love, love love this story! It's very well written and pulled him in instantly.
*Alyssa

“Hey,” said Olivia. “That coward might be your daddy someday. What do you think of that?”

“Pe’er my daddy?” Gwen thought about it. “Too weird!”

I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY! NOW MAKE A BOLIVIA WEDDING AS A SEQUEL, WIHT GWEN, AND I WILL GIVE YOU A BAKER'S DOZEN OF VIRTUAL COOKIES!

One last review for one last chapter...

It's been one hell of a fic lol. You managed to write such a long, well written fic that I have to say I'm a little jealous. I'm notoriously bad at multi-chapter fics... My updates are so irregular... so I just have to say congrats for staying with this.

well done :)

And thanks for the little mention at the start of the chapter