haha... great start. I wonder what past alto has with the jungle.

Wow.. This is so good, you've done a great job of capturing Alto and Sheryl's character. A bit OOC with the car scene but you did manage to pull it off nicely (with Alto being an ** and all).

It's been a long while since I've felt so mortified of seeing that I've just read up the story and will need to wait for the next chapter.

Anyways, hope to see an update soon.. Did I say that I really enjoyed reading this? :3

HIME RADAR, I WANTS IT =D
Great chapter! Thank you for updating so soon! The first part was great, building up the tension like that and snapping it with a hime v.s. queen tantrum!

I take it the outfit mentioned above is the blue dress and beret with the pink bow?

It's cool how you wrote in an outfit from the series, I think it's the first time I've seen this technique in a fanfiction that wasn't from a costume specific fandom!

One thing that bugs me a bit. You used the "Christmas lights at Christmas" description twice in a chapter and it feels a bit repetitive.

Nothing big, but it's just a pet peeve of mine. Like that 'your' 'you're' thing.

Looking forward to the next chapter (no pressure)!!

P.S. Is Ranka going to enter soon? Jealousy ensues!

To be honest, while I like seeing Alto and Sheryl together I still felt the makeout scene was sudden and OOC. At first I thought it was a dream that she was about to wake up from.

Loved this chapter but I have to admit that Alto was very un-hime like in his kissing Sheryl and then calling her a **. I really felt bad for Sheryl, but I think that the reason Alto is helping her is because, as Luca would say "Sempai is in luv." Update soon!

Ah. A slight AU this time! It's wonderfully written. You've managed to capture the characteristics of all the appearing characters s o far wonderfully. That little setting of Alto having gone to the prom Ranka sets a realistic background, as does the part with his job in the SMS.

Sheryl's tantrums and severe mood changes alongside Alto's reactions and thoughts are very authentic! I can totally see this being in an OVA or Voice Drama!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Is Ranka going to come in soon? How is Alto going to react to Sheryl's hug!?

=D

Wonderful chapter, I was chocking up when Alto made Sheryl feel so horrible (mean hime). I can't wait for the next chapter and for Alto to start falling for Sheryl's charms. And also I want to know what happened in Galia, could it have something to do with Ranka?

Tell me your secret!
How can you write so many great stories!
Nice chapter as usual *u*

LOL. That was SO Sheryl! :P

Love it! I can't wait to see what await Alto at dinner. Hhahaha... Update soon I hope? :)

Last question, very good one. Anyway, it looks like an interesting story, although it could use extra back story worked in.

Cute!
I love it! Please keep up the great work!
XD

Brilliant chapter! I was laughing so hard I almost fell of the bed. I especially loved the line about anime and love triangles. I also just loved your portrayal of Sheryl. She is confident, witty and straightforward without being whinny or abusive of Alto. This just brought out the best qualities of her and showed all the reasons why Alto would be attracted to her. I hope that even though this is a humorous story that in one scene you do explore the sadder things they have in common like loneliness. Ah but that is for the future. Update soon:)

Haha, I loved it! You just nailed Alto and Sheryl's first face-to-face conversation and both of their reactions. And this is going to be just the start of their journey.

Keep up the great work.

This is just too ridiculously fun to read XD I love it!

Sheryl is so dynamic and unpredictable while Alto is so rational (and skeptical) And their interaction? PRICELESS.

I can't wait for Alto to be exposed to more of Sheryl's quirks. It's going to be awesome *A*

This is a great start to a fun-sounding AU story. I liked your tackling of Grace, though I had to remind myself that she may not be evil-in-disguise here. :)

I can't wait to see what happens next.