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Love That Wicked
2009-10-02 . chapter 18
Whew. That whole "Kristin broke up with me" thing had me worried there for a while. I'm glad the girls both have jobs that the love. And their gifts to each other were perfect.

Give us more soon please. This is great.
Love That Wicked
2009-10-02 . chapter 17
Well I certainly didn't see that coming. I can understand where both Kristin and Maureen are coming from. I just hope their relationship can stand them being apart that long.
Love That Wicked
2009-10-02 . chapter 16
I'm glad Jeannie called Nancy. They need to be friends if their girls are going to be married. And I'm glad Kristin finally talked to her mom.
Love That Wicked
2009-10-01 . chapter 15
I'm having a really hard time liking Kristin's parents right now. She and Maureen were cuddling on a blanket, not making out or having sex where everyone could see them. Because they're not married they're not even supposed to touch? I know Kristin's lifestyle is hard for them to understand but they have to meet her halfway.

And yea!! for Sasha and Tommy. Maybe now there can be a double wedding.

More soon please.
Love That Wicked
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
It's funny to see Maureen suffering from culture shock for a change. And she and Kristin are so cute together. I just hope her family can come to terms with them being together and stop stressing the girls out.

More soon please.
Poet Screaming
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
Ok, so I'm really loving this story...this is definitely not the Maureen that ever came to mind with the mention of her name, but I love the way her character transitioned and matured. You've got some way with words, Friend. =) Please update soon!
MojoNolive93
2009-09-24 . chapter 13
Thank you SO much for the update. I love this story and missed it a lot when you didn't update it. I love the way you write Kristin and Maureen. Update as soon as you can.
Lvl2DragonTamer
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
I got the joke. I love the story. Seriously. I'll bake you some of Kristin's special cookies.

;)

Seriously, though, this was a brilliant idea and you had both characters down. Nice job!
MojoNolive93
2009-07-22 . chapter 12
I love this story. You have put my two favorite people together in a fic and I love it. PLEASE update soon!
vampire-girl-liz11
2009-07-13 . chapter 12
:D
amazing. i love it. thank you for writing this spectacular fic. ^_^
Love That Wicked
2009-07-06 . chapter 12
Kristin couldn't be more perfect for Mo if she tried. I loved how she handled Benny and I loved it even more when she talked about them having kids. And Tommy and Sasha are running a close second on the cute couple scale. Those Johnson girls are pretty lucky.

More soon please.
MissBonhamCartersPoppet
2009-06-25 . chapter 11
Aw, I loved the proposal. Very sweet. And the ring sounds beautiful. I could just picture Kristin getting upset over something like that... Eep, I can't wait to see what you write for the wedding, if you get that far :)

And Tommy and Sasha's story I like even more. I can really relate, having been a child in a custody battle once myself. Ron is an asshole.

One thing- you never had them speak to the pastor? =/ Great update, anyway.
Love That Wicked
2009-06-25 . chapter 11
I loved the proposal. It was sweet that Kristin got so upset because she wanted to be the one to ask Maureen. And Ron better hope he doesn't do anything to one of the kids or Sasha or he'll have Tommy and Maureen to answer to.

More soon please.
The Last Truffula Tree
2009-06-25 . chapter 11
Good chapter. The marriage seems a bit... Iono... fast. Three months isn't a long time... but whatever. Great job! The little ones are cute. :)
Amythista
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
I GET IT!
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