Can't wait to read it
Maria

Thank you for not killing Amanda outright like it was done originally. Although I admit it doesn't look good for any of them.

nice i hope this is a kyle/jessi XD

take time life comes first totally get the lost thing
maria

I found this story to be too rushed. You had too much action going on too quickly. I do like your ideas, though. A bit gory, but exciting to read.

a little rushed and gory, but i kind of like it.

Holy crap THIS IS AWESOME! I effin LOVE fight scenes!

Holy ** you killed Declan!?!?!? He is my third fav charachter after Jessi and Kyle! Sad! Carol bloom dead? Awesome! Now just kill Amanda and life is good!

Wait, why are they fighting?!?!? I'd anything they should be doing something else that begins with an f... ;-)

Grace kingsly

had a lot of fun reading intresting
maria

loved it!
i enjoyed it very much!
loved the scene kyle and jessi were beating the crap out of each other!
write more!

Nice spin on the story. Keep on writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!

her name is spelled Jessi
and she could so kick kyle's ** is she wanted to!
write more! =]

good start on the story... where is the second chapter?