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| Reviews for Twelve |
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  Ecila 5/6/13 . chapter 2 Dori: but you DIDN'T, did you?! *bursts into her fantastical-acting-tears)* Ecila: shut up, Dori; and I'll let you have this one, but stop using my name in the name box. Dori: I-i don't want them tracking my real account through that retchid THING! |
 AthenasOwl11 12/29/12 . chapter 2I feel so sorry for you. I've never been cyberbullied, but I've been teased and made fun of in school. My name rhymes with food, and last year, everyone in older grades called me that food. (It was a kind of dip.) It was embarrassing and I felt hurt, but this year, I'm okay with it. I'm happy that you've overcome those haters, and I'm proud to be a FanFictioner alongside you. (This is also a great story. Please cotinue it!) |
| nikkip62683 12/3/12 . chapter 1 red your profile how do you hate firestar he is my fave and Squirrelflight/Brambleclaw are an awesome couple i agree with you on most of the others like mikan and natsume |
| Guest 10/15/12 . chapter 2 update |
| skybrezz everdeen 7/19/12 . chapter 2 Yay hip hip horray o.k that souned really really dumb. But this story is awsome I'm happy your still are updateing |
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 2 Girl you better this is good |
| ILUV ZAMMIE andDanTrixie 6/28/12 . chapter 1 I wonder what will happen |
| Chris 6/23/12 . chapter 1 *nearly dies of awesomeness* |
| iluh-vtheclique 6/16/12 . chapter 2 ! |
| Jyoti 10/9/11 . chapter 1 OMG I miss reading those books, Junie B Jones. Great job but some sentences were a little choppy. |
| Jondrette 12/28/10 . chapter 2 GO JIM! Boo Herb... Sorry, my opinion _ I like it so far... 'cept for the acne, but I cant complain 'cause I was cursed with it too... ;) |
| Salami The Llama 11/15/10 . chapter 2 Don't ask questions, just update... |
| RiverstarsailorSong 11/13/10 . chapter 1 Okay where to begin, this is an okay idea but you didn't write this story to it's best level. 1. It's way too short try 1,000 words 2. Your grammer is terrible 3. You didn't discribe some of your OCs very well and I have basicly know nothing about them So if you work on these things your story will have some readers! |
| Paper Aeroplanes 7/26/10 . chapter 2 Ya know...I honestly never really LIKED the Junie B. Jones series..Like, I did, but not so much anymore...although I DO like this...which I kinda find ironic...CONTINUE IT PLEASE! AND SOON CUZ I'M NOT PATIENT! _-WORLD OF NEW-_ |
| Ilovemydad 6/14/10 . chapter 2 what happened to you were going to continue this |
