Don't feel bad about what the others wrote. This story is actually very cute :) keep up the good work!

What is this shit?

read this.

This is without a doubt the funniest thing I've ever read XD XD XD I love naru and sasu's reactions at the end of this chapter! This is a really good story btw XD

Umm...

Your character has ALL the traits of a mary-sue.

She's frop dead gorgeos, cool and collected, sasuke and itachi fall in love with her, IMMEDIATlY, and your character is popular. What, now her parents are dead? ha, if that was what u were thinking, your a girl who cant get a boy in real life because your ugly or fat, so you make a beautiful one in story life..

FAT UGKY WHORE BITCH!

I love this story I kinda skiped some chapters though.

Soo... the first thing she does is being bitchy to the secretary that came to pick her up? And she addressed a complete and older stranger (Tsunade) so causually? Moreover, I can't really se her having much of a personality. A tip is to not give her too much of a horrifying past, that's a major mary-sue trait and no one likes them. So far I wouldn't call her a mary-sue, but be careful!

who will she end up with? hope its sasuke!