 lily moonlight 2009-11-04 . chapter 16Sorry!! I know I've taken ages :( And I'd be a bit hypocritical to mention review replies, when I owe you one myself ;) But that's coming soon. Very good as always! Like the repetition of the 'At that moment', works well, creates a kind of hypnotic rhythm to it. Really captures that feeling of time pausing and then how it moves on inevitably, even after destruction. |
 deblease 2009-10-28 . chapter 16very good |
 crusoe89 2009-10-27 . chapter 16I love these tiny, perfect little tag fics! Keep them coming...
Thanks! |
 DaniWilder 2009-10-27 . chapter 16That was nice.
I'm almost up to Brotherhood in my Adventure series, so I know the episode well :-)
Keep going!
DW |
 Chief of the Furlings 2009-09-30 . chapter 15Very nice... Lovely descriptions, really painted a picture. :) |
 lily moonlight 2009-09-28 . chapter 15:O This one scared me! It struck a chord, dreams of disasters with the sea, being swept away *shiver* very well written, loved the description of the blue-green water swallowing and rising, and with icy arms. I'm intrigued as well by the idea of the other person. Very good! |
 Leesa Perrie 2009-09-27 . chapter 15I've been meaning to say how much I've enjoyed these Missing Moments! This one (Before I Sleep - Water) finally made me get around to doing so! Excellent little snippet - love the 'weed-tangle of bedclothes', very descriptive and fitting to his nightmare.
Poor Rodney! |
 DaniWilder 2009-09-26 . chapter 15Excellent. I often forget all about this episode.
Great scene.
DW |
 deblease 2009-09-26 . chapter 15Rodney was alot braver than he ever thought, good one. |
 x Varda x 2009-09-26 . chapter 15Poor Rodney (again) thinking that he doesn't have it in him to sacrifice himself to save everyone! Another good one!
(You know I really don't mind if you make every chapter Rodney centric :P) |
 x Varda x 2009-09-26 . chapter 14You know I prefer Rodney... but that was good. Kinda reminds me of the Aragorn/Arwen thing in LOTR. The last line was great. I only like Chaya because of all the tension and angst she created :) |
 x Varda x 2009-09-26 . chapter 13Aw, poor Rodney! It must've been awful thinking he was going to die, and knowing the exact minute it would happen. Interesting to have it from Radek's POV too as he thought he was going to die too, but would have to watch Rodney go first. |
 lily moonlight 2009-09-22 . chapter 14I hope you manage to finish all your challenges (and stories :P) Sorry this is a little late. I like your song choice as always, it fits very well. This was really moving, and more so with its brevity. I love the shortness of the dialogue, and how it shows that words aren't needed as much. I really liked the way he loves how she pronounces his name. |
 crusoe89 2009-09-18 . chapter 14Woohoo! Still reading. Still enjoying. Thanks! |
 Chief of the Furlings 2009-09-18 . chapter 14Aww... Lovely and heart-wrenching at the same time. Very nice. :) |