Wow thats awsome ^^ I loved this story can't wait to see your next story ^^ 10,0,0/10,0,0 stars

Aw, I loved how you ended this. A triumphant return home...a promise to return to those they care for...the new adventures are waiting just ahead! ^_^ Can't wait to see that sequel!

all i can say is alsome

A planet of Death...how tragic. First planets filled with vibrant, living folks, then one with only a handful remaining.

And there are few things more effective in dealing with bad guys (if you're too morally good to kill them) than in taking their powers away. ^_^ Nice one!

Vary good story I LOVE IT ^^ keep writing

yay awsome i hope there is more to that store than next chapter c'oz is sounds like theres more to it

thats so sweet that pome made me cry

Aw, this chapter was so touching. Saying goodbye can always be so sorrowful. But it's not really "goodbye". It's just..."until next time". ^_^

it is fan tastc

I love this story i think this chapter is one of the best Chapters ^^ keep writing

i love it keep it up

nice ^^ i love it keep writing :)

Two Carmens at once? Orion's best dream come true! And at last, they've returned to normal. Or as normal as things get. Can't wait for the next chapter.

awsome10/10

awsome 10/10