Been almost* 5 Months! ACK Nutter come on :(

Great begining looking forward to more.

Great, so far! Looking forward to more...

(Lots of the fanfics put the boys in Nebraska, right where I am. [Sigh], if only I'd actually run into them here.)

*is happy*

You know, I'm glad I didn't review that before. And that I had to read it again to do a proper review. I had almost forgetten how good it was. :P Hey!! I said "almost"!

What I didn't like:
... *fly buzz*
... *cricket chirp*
... *HOOT HOOT* Oh!! Bud!! Your owl made it all the way here... should I send it back to you??!! :) *is a smartass, yes*

What I liked:
... do we really have to go there? Really? Maybe I should just copy paste the whole thing you know? *is lazy too*
Okay, i'll try.
-Love the little affection gestures between the family, it's so rare in fanfics (okay in the show too) and well we can't keep hurting them without showing a bit of love here and there. ;)
-Love that Dean thinks he can make it and John lets him try... Dean Dean Dean... will you ever learn... *shakes head*
-Love that Sam can't see that John has to leave in order to help Dean... Sam Sam Sam... will you ever learn... *shakes head*
-Love that John is calling Bobby to keep an eye on the Boys and that he gets called asshole... Bobby Bobby Bobby... I love him and you know it :P \0/
-Love that Dean got a piece of him chomped off. LMAO... must have been really gross if John almost threw up. Hehe. >:D
-Love you for writing this for me!

YAY!

Can I get the next part now??! :D

Oh and the next word is... hmm... is... *think think think*... okay, let's go with "ZEN". Thanks.
Huggles!!

This is fantastic!! I'm so happy to see another story from John's POV - this...is gonna kick ass!!

*Smishes you tight*

Just found this story. I love it and I hope to read more soon.

I like this! Poor Dean! Please update soon! :D

you don't want to get on the bad side of John...always an interesting story when you have John thrown in...

Definitely a reason for Dean to hate witches and think that they're "unsanitary". Poor boys, all three of them. Of course John's going to want to go and hunt and "fix this" and of course Sam sees that as John "deserting" them. At least Dean isn't aware enough to put himself in the middle.

This is seriously really awesome so far.I love the way you portray the emotions in this chapter, especially Sam and John's. By the way you do a brilliant job conveying John's character. Your writing and characterization is extremly fluid and spot on. Dialouge is amazing too and the interractions are so natural. Which I must say, I am jealous of since writing dialouge is not my strong point xD Man, I can't believe that witch bit Dean! What a...uh bitch. lol
You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see what will become of Dean or what happens next! I love me some Hurt!Dean
~Shannon ^^

Hey Hon!

A new story!! *jumps up and down* ^^
I love the chap! And I can't wait for more!! ^^
I'm really curious about the next chapter(s). And knowing you it'll get much worse before it eventually gets better. *evil grins*
Keep up the good work! ;)

And please hurry, okay! *puppy dog eyes* ^^

Love and hugs

Mary

Is it not Dean who called witches unsanitary haha??
This is GREAT. Can't wait for the updates :)

Awesome start, Mish.

Really like how you wrote John in this chapter. He'll never win Father of the Year honours but he's no demon either and we know he loves his boys. Love his introspection on Sam's growth spurt.

Great job with characterization and dialogue - very natural, lovely flow. Love the idea of telling the story from the various perspectives, too. Oh, and fantastic snark from Dean. :)

Fabulous villain - can't wait to see where the quest for revenge goes.

More please.

Cheers, Sculls

Think you got a great start Mish. Love it so far.

Huzzah, brilliant start and a nice sense of impending doomage. I'm loving the way you right John, it makes a pleasant change for him to be shown as a loving parent. Plenty of drama, although this little bit made me giggle/snort/cough

"before cutting me off with his usual goodbye of, ‘you asshole’.

Great stuff, can't wait for chapter 2 buddy
Chat later
Wends xx