 Bound Dragon 2009-07-19 . chapter 5Someone is going to stop her I hope or she stops. Great chapter update real soon plz |
 drowzee insomniac 2009-07-17 . chapter 4Thanks for the update. I hate it when authors do this, but real life is more important. I hope things get better soon for you. I look forward to seeing updates when you get back. :D |
 lunarmoth131 2009-07-12 . chapter 3I like it! Write more soon! |
 Piper -loves you- 2009-06-26 . chapter 2O.o
Wow. Not liking the evil-Tony thing. D:
Haha, I really want to see where this goes though.
Do you have a beta?
The writing isn't bad (at all!), but I got distracted from the story by some mistakes. If you don't, I can help you (if you want) and if you do...get a new one? >_<
Sorry if I sound like a total **.
-Piper |
 lunarmoth131 2009-06-24 . chapter 2Wow was that a surprise. I'm really curious to see what will happen next! Write more soon! |
 ShinigamiApples 2009-06-14 . chapter 1moar would be good, i wanna see where its headed to
xx |
 Kiefer 2009-05-31 . chapter 1 Oh yes continue please, it reminds me of a couple which I know. |
 VillageVoice 2009-05-29 . chapter 1You must continue. I have a question though...what is the major pairing throughout the story? |
 drowzee insomniac 2009-05-29 . chapter 1I say keep going too!! One question though, is this an Abby/Ziva fic or a Mcgee/Abby fic? |
 kittykatt99 2009-05-29 . chapter 1KEEP GOING! |