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Bridgette Barrymore
2009-11-07 . chapter 9
Hey! Bridgette and Cari here! (I means We)
Ooh, interesting, the memories? Awesome, thanks so much! Can't wait to read it!

Yes, Rebecca! Bridge couldn't! Yes, Rebecca, I actually like you now!
So that's where Syd inherited her pout. I love the pouts.
How sweet, Rebecca not wanting her daughter to be part.
Derek, such a stupid idea thinking Rebecca would believe her, puh-leez...Derek?!
Yes! She finally says that BRIDGE IS HER DAUGHTER'S BOYFRIEND!
Ah, so they were together!
Appearances can be deceiving, yes, but Bridge? Yes, he looks slow and stuff but he's the best friend you can ever have!
Hm, Derek, Rebecca's already suspecious of you.
True, it wasn't.
LOL, that's good thinking.

Wow, no surprise Syd's home has a security room. :) Sky and Z are together! I love her determination. That would've been better, so Rebecca is protected. Oh, the memories, excited!
Bridgette:I'm sure my parents would like Bridge, LOL.
Normal: True, since when did he care? But I guess it makes sense, since he's meeting his girlfriend's PARENTS.
I agree, it's ridiculous. Especially from Bridge.
VERY CUTE!
Okay, moment of truth!
Well, at least Mr. Drew is nice, for a while.
What is up with them? They don't like Bridge...impossible.
I agree, better to let them be not there than them not liking him there.
I agree! It was rude and stubborn!
It was unfair for them to treat Bridge that way!

Suspense! So Jaymes is with the man. Ah! Suspense, so much!

Okay, I LOVE the chapter and yes WE LOVE the memory! So interesting! I hope you update soon! Pft, like I update fast. But if you can, we'd be so happy!
Great job Jusea!
Can't wait for more!
Puggles Master
2009-11-06 . chapter 9
Poor Bridge, so misunderstood. I like the background and Syd's frustration and envy of job assignments. Also, the mysterious servant gives a nice twist. Good chapter. Update soon.
Puggles Master
2009-11-06 . chapter 8
Nice cliffhanger. Although, I have my suspicions about Derek, but I'll keep them to myself for now. I like the returning eerie feeling, but more so, I like the background you dipped into of Rebecca's time at SPD working with Kat. I hope you venture there more, but if you don't, that's fine, too.
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-10-24 . chapter 8
Oh, guess what. More connection. We can review. I'm used to 'I' but it's Cari and me, so 'I' means 'we'.

Yay, Kat can fix it! Kat, I hope you're right! Please let it not be blood! Yes, you go, DC! You're making Sky and Z go together!

Split up? No, that means they won't be together! But, then again, they could look at more places in less time.

Syd, don't give up! I gree, it'll take forever. Anyone could've done! I've always wanted to be in SPD, and I wanna be there more because of this! What? What did she realize? Ah, thank you, Mr. Drew. I'm glad you believe in SPD. Wow, I wanna know how Syd told her parents about Bridge. Ah, frustration, I agree. What is wrong with Bridge?! Nothing! Hm...that could be, Mrs. Drew's and not Mr. Drew's.

Rebecca! Come on, who is it?! And don't dare say it's Bridge! Or I will...well, I don't know but do not! So she remembers! I agree with Rebecca, I'm getting irritated with him too. Oh my gosh, he said it! He said it! He said it!

*ANGRY MOB*

Anyways, really love this chapter, just wish I had no school the next time you update. Hopefully it'll be this week so I don't!

LOVE THE CHAPTER!
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-10-24 . chapter 7
We really liked this chapter. We really like the suspense in hear. We really hope they'll be able to find them soon! We really wonder where Rebecca is. Off to read the next chapter! Sorry, this is really short. Limited connection.
Puggles Master
2009-10-10 . chapter 7
Good chapter. It definitely raised a few questions. I'm confused though on Bridge's morpher. Was the first metal object his morpher, or just a piece of it? I may be mistaken, but it sounds like they found it twice. That aside, I think you've done a great job at heightening the mystery and suspense.
Puggles Master
2009-10-02 . chapter 6
I liked the structure of the chapter. Framing the story with Bridge and Rebecca was clever. It was a nice touch of showing the growth of their relationship. I liked the inner struggle Syd had to stay up and continue to search, even though her body wanted to sleep. Good job.
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-09-28 . chapter 6
Sorry for not reading yet. I think I told you why...anyways, I found a new way to review so I'll be a faithful reviewer!

Hm? Who's Derek Jameson? I have bad feeling about him but...who knows. Hm...I'm not a fan of Derek, and I admit that. Wow, Derek speaks so...yeah, that word. Ah, Bridge agrees with me LOL. Rebecca's so rude, but then again, who wouldn't be with Bridge speaking that way...probably me...:P.

Wow, I feel so bad for Syd. Number one on her father's list and yet he wasn't there in NTC for a long time? That's a very big problem. Oh, poor Syd. She lost Bridge AND her mother, two of whom she loves. A day and a half...Wow, that much people and maybe even more are out of town but they're in the list...this is so gonna be hard.

LOL. Z thinking that makes sense. I agree with Z...I hope...I'm a reader, I don't know. OMG, this is getting harder and harder...Yay! They found Bridge's morpher! What? I love Z glancing at Sky.

I agree. Split? What kind of partners were they? Hm...why are the three of them together?

LOL. I love how Sky is annoyed with Rachel, it is Rachel he's talking about right?, anyways, I so think he harbors feelings for Z.

OMG! So that's how they were captured! It was only supposed to be Rebecca but thanks to Bridge, he was captured too! Ouch, that's gotta hurt. I agree. There's something about Derek...but then Rebecca might as well...Yay! Rebecca is in Bridge's side! Wow, I really can't help but smile when Rebecca said that about Bridge.

Wait. Was it only Rebecca he saw? What about Derek? And he was knocked out too...I so think it's Derek but then again. OMG, what if Rebecca uses this against Bridge again?

Wow, so suspenseful. I love this chapter! Anyways, I can't wait for the next ones!
Puggles Master
2009-09-01 . chapter 5
I like the sense of foreboding of what is about to happen. Also, I like the strong characterization of Mrs. Drew. Nice job.
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-08-21 . chapter 5
Hm...as much as I like Syd, I don't like Rebecca. I'm sorry if this sounds rude but if Syd's mom worked as a teacher, didn't they say that her parents worked in SPD, wouldn't they have known Kat? Unless it's only Syd's father? Sorry, I'm not so sure.

Rebecca's so...something! I hate how she's treating Bridge! Well, I hope something will happen and she'll soon realize Bridge is perfect for Syd! Yeah! I hope that happens soon.

I just realized something, in the Mission: Two Hearts Through Fire, Syd was abducted and now, it's Bridge. Haha.

I AM SO LOVING THIS STORY! I wonder what Rebecca saw? Can't wait for more!!
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
Super sorry for not reviewing!! I was about to email you when I saw this so I'm really sorry!

There you go again Jusea! You're really the only one who makes me love Sky/Z moments the most! I love this chapter, it really shows the growing relationship of Sky and Z. You got their characters really well.

Aww, I feel super bad for Syd! She lost (well not lost, lost) two of the people she really loves, her mom and of course, Bridge! I hope they're okay! Anyways, if they're gone, I hope if they're okay, Syd's mother could accept Bridge, since I read that she's not digging him. I hope she sees how much he cares about Syd and maybe, he'll even tell her that he cares about everyone he cares for, including her. I love Syd's thoughts when she said that she and Bridge will do everything they have in their power to get Sky and Z together.

Wow, the longest review I ever did! Anyways, I'm off to read the next chapter!!
rebeccaS
2009-08-21 . chapter 5
Hi! I am so happy you are writing a sequel! I loved your first story, and I am really liking thing one!
I love the little Z and Sky moments you sneak in even though the story is obviously about Syd and Bridge. Do you think Z and Sky will be getting together in this story? :) Lol
JakeBlacksGirl
2009-08-01 . chapter 4
I like the scene between Sky and Z a lot! :D
Puggles Master
2009-07-25 . chapter 4
I like the foreshadowing of perhaps Mr. Drew not being the target, but his wife. Having Bridge, possibly, being in the wrong place at the wrong time. The relationship development between Z and Sky was a change of pace. I like that Sky's recollection, his last moments before being knocked out was shared, definitely left me thinking. With no offense as to your writing ability, I did feel a little disappointed, having read the first installment and seeing the descriptivness employed, I felt like I was missing that with this chapter and was being pushed through the scenes versus being guided, if that makes sense. That aside, I think it was a good chaper. Nice job.
JakeBlacksGirl
2009-06-27 . chapter 3
Great chapter! Why do they always crash parties? XD
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