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TheKritty
2009-11-09 . chapter 2
Oh man, I loved the 2nd one...*jumps in and hugs Dean*
And the first one was great too.

Good job!
CatBeist
2009-06-05 . chapter 2
OH one GREAT STory! wicked job, lOVE IT
Twinchy
2009-06-03 . chapter 2
Yeah, maybe Dean went to "Hell with his head hung low; he'd left with it even lower" but most definitely he shouldn't forget to see that he left AT ALL.

And he may be broken but he's still 'functional' - which is more than most of the others would have expected of him.

Very well observed and sad drabble, sweetysmart.
Twinchy
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
Poor Sammy! I'll gladly volunteer for warming him up. :-D
bhoney
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Man, it's hard to believe that Dean would lose track of that much time, broken watch or not. Poor Sam. Wonder why he didn't call Dean's cell to find out where he was. I can understand why he'd be mad.
bhoney
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
Wow, sad!
Mad Server
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
I love that Sam doesn't fret about the leather seats.
sunnyjunedays
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
Hi, Oh poor poor Dean, he really does loathe himself. I'll give him a hug anytime, just to make him feel better you understand. x
sunnyjunedays
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Hi, Hehe, poor Sammy, it's not very often that he's forgotten by his big brother. x
1983Sarah
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
Both are great! Good use of the word in two very different ways.
Elise
2009-05-30 . chapter 2
I don't understand why these are posted togethre. They don't go together...at all. And yes, we saw in the show that Sam can see Dean is weaker. This drabble bites (the second one), it contains info we already knew and had nothing more to add or build on his character. the first one was only okay. but at aleast it had some plot.
Vampyvii
2009-05-29 . chapter 2
They were more than okay, Sweety! But now you must be obliged to comfort that poor boy!! Good one!
Enkidu07
2009-05-29 . chapter 2
Great job with these. I especially enjoyed the first one - I would be mad too... and 4 hours dean? Even a broken watch doesn't buy you that much time!
Dream Painter
2009-05-29 . chapter 2
Nice job on both. ^^ The first one was rather cute. Poor Sammy!

And the second... aw - poor Dean. *gives him much needed hug*
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