This situation is very plausable given their personalities, keeping the subjects in character is mainly what I look for in any fanfic but especially in the romance genre. Can't wait to see how you bring them back together in future chapters (note the shameless use of a plural) ^_^

Great seasons, it's been AGES since I've read this fic! Glad to see you didn't forget about it though; you did an excellent job on it.

I'll maintain that a Charley-Modo relationship doesn't seem all that plausible to me. I can't quite put my finger on it, but those two just don't seem like they'd hit it off too well. Maybe it's because Modo's a little more restrained than the other two (or more obviously restrained, anyways). I do think, however, that you pull this off very nicely. Still doesn't seem entirely plausible to me, but you do portray the relation in a realistic manner, and that's not something I see on very often. Modo's response at the end of this chapter was just BANG ON.

Looking forward to more, that's for sure. I like it when stories challenge my own ideas and opinions; makes for a more enlightening read.

~Hera Ledro

ohh pore Modo and I hope that Charly doesn't get the wrong idea, please update soon

Well, he's certianly qualified for the year's Densest Man award. :p Poor Charley.. now she hasta chase him down and shake some sense into him. Looking forward to more chapters.. :)

Oh my god!! I can't wait to read what's next! Poor Charley and Modo. I'm so happy to see another chapter to this very captivating story =)

Ah, wonderful angst! Thank you, thank you for updating!

Oh noes! Mis-communication! Do not want! We want Modo and Charley happy (in this story, at least ;) )

Hope they work it out! Can't wait to see more =D

Can someone please smack some sense into Modo?! If Charley hadn't wanted to do those things i'm sure she'd have stopped him, she better track him down before anything happens.

Aie! Charley GO AFTER HIM! *ahem* I'm glad to see that you updated this fic, and I can't wait for more XD

love the story
hope you'll continue
and i hope that modo and charley stay together
bebeye

I'm not much one for drama, but I loved every drop of it in this. I can't wait to see what happens next, what with maybe Vin finds out about this? I have to say my fave pairing is T/C, now followed by M/C. Good job with that.

Hmm, I gotta agree with everyone else who reveiwed this lovely story that you've wrote, it's very well written and splendid.

Please continue this, I really wanna see what happens next. =)

no it was great write more please

Not toomuch drama at all!! Amazing in the detail, very well written and well... hot as hell! =) I can't wait for what you've next in this fanfic. Modo always was my favorite.

I just love Modo stories. He's really the sweetest of the bros.

And thank you for continuing this!