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Camy99
2009-11-17 . chapter 4
oh that reminds me how much I hate when she says something before he has the chance to do it. Ya know?
Camy99
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
AHAH. that was supposed to be funny right? Should I stop reviewing, this is the third within 5 minutes you've gotten from me lol. BUT YOU'RE SO GOOD YOU DESERVE IT DANG IT! XD
Camy99
2009-11-17 . chapter 1
I see joy in my near future. Like 24 chapters worth of it to be specific. yes, please [; Oh if only you wrote for all my favorite fandoms, wouldn't that just make the world go round?
bsloths
2009-11-04 . chapter 24
I adore this scrap heap!

Unconsciously-Deliberate, Acutely-Ingrained Ignorance.

Yup, that's our Derek and Casey! *smiles*

You had me going, "It can't be what I think it is, can it? Maybe. No, it can't be. Maybe. What the heck else could it be? It must be about them. But that can't be." You wrote the misconception very, very well! :)
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 24
I love these sneak attacks. Very awesome. I hope you continue adding random drabbles from time to time. These were all delicious. Nomnomnom.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 20
And promptly following the initial kiss he verily OBLITERATED WITH HIS RAY GUN OF EARTH-SHAKING MANLY SEX POWER Casey's virginity. Obliterated. Ray-gun. Pizza-stained couch. You all know he took it downtown.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 17
The 'sexy kid sister' just kills me- KILLS me. Loved.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 16
bahah, pron for the win. But watching Casey in a wet bathmat sorta is like pron to Derek, I suppose.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 14
I love bickering and bantering. This is exactly the type of conversation I like to carry out with my men too; challenging and fighting, vying for dominance. Oh, those two. I love this. Especially Derek's dialogue, it just makes me grin.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 13
I love Ralph too, he's a cutie, lol. I can see the boys having a betting pool. Seriously. They would probably have a little chart or something too somewhere.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 9
Radioactivity WOULD explain her general manicness and neuroticism. This was awesome
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 8
aha, I can totally see the two of them having a whole conversation 'getting to know one another' for the benefit of her clueless friend and their own sick amusement. They will make up fibs about his middle name being 'Esteban' and him owning several pet iguanas and having a penchant for calligraphy, and Casey will admit to being a rather avid fan of roller derby, whereupon Derek will reveal that he knows this really hot girl who has a similar interest. The evening will devolve from there.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 6
*shakes fist* I dislike second person. But I enjoy almost-pron. I enjoy real-pron even more, though.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
If I were her, I would worry if Derek lost interest in making my life Hell too. And those skanky secretaries, always making happy men two time their wives with promises of succulent roast beef sammiches. The Nerve.
Harbour Master
2009-10-28 . chapter 4
ehe, he has to play the tough guy badass, doesn't he? But we all know he's good. He probably somehow makes up for it later in the evening by claiming he's way too hot in his coat and then 'forcing' Casey to take it and carry it for him, whereupon she would don it. And then he would see a tree along the forest line by the road and carve their names into it to immortalize their daring trek in the night. He would no doubt carve 'Space-Case', but still, it's the thought that counts...
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