poor Misty, what is she going to do with him. Hopefully and eventually he will grow up.

Stupid Ash! He would get bit by a black widow!

Why isn't Ash answering her? I know he doesn't want to be found but he should at least answer her.

Poor Ash he is so dense. and that poor spider. I wonder how Misty is dealing with this?

so aside from the most violent abuse of the ellipse that the magebears ever seen, very good. captured ash perfectly.

Heh, very amusing. Shame we didn't see the actual kiss. Or did you have a sequal?

Ah, a happy ending, I will look at the sequal, what are the odds, I have a New Years story too! The only difference is that, unlike your Christmas story and New Years story, mine are NOT sequals, my Christmas story is my longest story yet and my New Years story is a one-shot. If you want, look through them.

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Well this is a bad predicament! I sure hope that Ash feels better, the plot is good, but the fact that Ash is afraid of Misty eating him like the Black Widow did that male spider sort of ruins the romantic moment.
sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Oh, cliffie, I have to read the next chapter and hope that the aaml will soon show, can't wait to see what happens!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

This is good, I love the spider bit, my brother is arachna-phobic, it's funny. Anyway, great job! Although Ash is older now and he wouldn't act like that anymore, even if it was for Misty under the mistletoe. Anyway, great job! I have a pretty good Christmas story too if I say so myself.

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

That's fantastic. How do you do it?

YOU FREACKED ME OUT WITH THAT! I HAVE ARAKNID-PHOBIA! MY HAND JERKED FROM THE MOUSE WHEN I FELT SOMETHING TICKLE MY HAND! IT WAS THE MOUSE PAD BUT IT STILL FREACKED ME OUT! Great story so far

Oh my gosh that was so funny! You have a great sense of humor! That made me laugh so hard at the end! Everyone is in character and it was written quite nicely, I could read it well. Great job! I didn't want it to end! Lol!

Oh wow, that was..well, hilarious XD I loved the way Ash was so, I dunno, he seemed so small and weak..and really, really, stubborn..

This fic kind of makes me wonder what really DOES go through Ash's head in the oficial Pokemon series..

So...

CUTE!