Omg. I'm really loving this fic. But I want Ollie back. Please. Will you bring Ollie back into the fic? I'm a huge Chlollie fan and this whole storyline is just breaking my heart and kinda making me hate Dick even though he's a nice enough guy. Please update soon. Really loving this.

Okay. To be honest, reading the first three chapters, I was kinda bored. But that's what summeries are for because I kept remembering the fact that she might go to Gotham.

And then it got interesting. There was drama and your way to translate Oliver and Chloe really made this story wonderful. I'm really, really hoping they do make it through this, since she does love him.

I found it silly she dropped her life because she was pregant, so there must be some other reason I missed. I was kinda happy when Oliver left the city to go to his hometown. Clark deserves it at this point. I just wish Lois would smack sense into him.

Um...let's see. It's actually getting somewhere I like. Barbara was always my favorite and ever since that one episode in smalliville when the Legion said there is no Chloe sulliven, I thought "Hey, she has the power to change her ID, why not become Barbara?" But I guess smallville is planning to kill her off instead...hm...

So, over all, I'm glad this storyline is structured. Only, I want Chloe to become Batgirl and that's impossible, seeing that she's pregnant. Oh, and I wish to see a confrontation between Chloe and Oliver.

(Worse case: Dick becomes a father figure to the baby. Damn.)

Holy Cow-Cakes! He knows! Does Ollie? What's gonna happen? EEk, super excited. I hope Dick will be ok with her being
'with child' if he finds out... Is the baby gonna be ok in the future? Can't wait for the next update. :D I hope you have a happy thanksgiving aswell!

Ah I loved it, worth the wait completely! Hopefully you update again soon, I really want to see Ollie again and I like Dick a lot, but Chloe/Ollie are better in my opinion.

Hello, I read your fic this morning, and at first(in principle) not crei that went away to being interested very much, but I have taken a great surprise to me, your fic is brilliant(genial), I have liked it(him,her) very much like you have made that Chloe had a relation with oliver, but my question is, Oliver is going to kill Lex in deed? Already have they forgotten her(it)? And the relation for that I wait arises between(among) her(it) and brilliant(genial) Dick, I am eager to know that dira Dick when it(he,she) knows that this pregnant woman, assurance that does not matter for him(her) and volvera Oliver? Or Clark?? Thousand questions and no response up to the near(next) chapter, I wait for it with anxieties, it(he,she) goes to favorites, you write brilliantly(genially), though it is difficult to me to understand it because I do not speak anything mas that Spanish. A greeting.

Woah! I'm so loving this. You have no idea how much! It's so terribly awesome. Just one question though, is this a Chlollie or Chloe/Dick fic??

Oh, awesome, awesome, awesome! I am just squeeing with happiness. Not only did you update, but it was just incredibly wonderful. I love the bit at the end where Bruce showed his hand, and it's neat that we have a mention of Oliver. I saw in my email this was updated, and I immediately thought 'I love you!'. Very awesome!

That was thoroughly entertaining! I loved the ending with Bruce revealing what he knew about Chloe's real identity. Hahaha. My amusement slowly escalated until I had a very large grin on my face--that's how much I enjoyed the ending of the chapter. Hee hee, the picture of Bruce and Ollie together sounds so cute! Superb. This was well worth the wait in between chapters. I mean, obviously I'd love to know more asap. But, in the grand scheme of things, finding time to write is understandably difficult. (It's been a month since I've update my own work--ops!)

Anywho, this just made my evening more fun, and certainly justified the break I was taking from my English paper. Yuck. I just keep telling myself though, as an English major it's only going to make me a better writer. Yeah. Whatever. Analyzing a few of Sidney's sonnets is not my cup of tea. Again, you really didn't need to know that. It's the coffee--I swear!

Back to the legitimate review, fantastic job! I'm still very interested to see how this all plays out. I'm concerned for Dick though, I feel like he likes Chloe aka Babs too much. In my mind, Chloe and Ollie have to get back together in the end. *Sighs* regardless, I like how it's progressing too much now to turn my back on this story.

Until your next installment,
-lemons

(I think I'll procrastinate so more, and reread this chapter! Mwahahaha)

This continues to be beautifully written and ever-so-intriguing. It's so much fun to watch the story unfold, because there's always that tension between where I want it to go and where I think it's going to go and where it eventually does go. Keep up the great work, whenever you have the time (and I can sympathize on chapter-posting-gaps - I'm drowning in secondary college education at the moment).

Good story so far. But please make Chloe end up with Ollie in the end. I just can't stand Dick Grayson. And poor Ollie, Chloe is breaking his heart and she's stringing Dick along.

This is probably one of the best Smallville stories I've read.

Original, and I like that the characters are in character, as well as developing further.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

I absolutely love this story, but i'm a bit worried how Dick's gonna react when her pregnancy is revealed. And, will Ollie ever come back? I enjoy her life now, but i am a bit curioius of what has yet to come.
I eagerly look forward to the next update. <3 :D

Being in roughly the same boat, academically speaking, you have my deepest sympathies as well as a hefty dose of encouragement to continue your stunningly well-executed story. Keep up the great work, when you get a chance, and until then try not to worry that we're hanging on your every word - everyone understands that fandom has its place, and that it's not the center of the universe, no matter how much we might whine.

I'm so excited that you updated, regardless of length. It was great, I like Dick but I want Ollie to resurface. I know it's wishful thinking, but I really want them to get together in the show and you capture the banter so well. Update soon, I hope school calms down for you.