 Anon 7/13/10 . chapter 5 I absolutely adored this story. I even admit that it made me tear up a little. This is fantastic stuff and I'm eagerly awaiting any other works of yours. |
 144829 10/2/09 . chapter 5LOVED the ending with the rings on them. That was really sweet. Felt bad for Kaho though. I suppose everyone did haha. On another note I thought it was a little weird, reading about a more vulnerable and a way more naive Eriol, but I liked that explanation with Clow and Madoushi. LOL
I liked how you gave feeling to the scenes. It's so hard to explain, but to say it simply, I thought it was very well written. I liked it) |
 Chris LaFey 8/31/09 . chapter 1Oh, jeez. He's got the memories of a man who lived for centuries, one that loved but didn't realize it. Now he's being childish AGAIN, and reiterating!
Sometimes, people really astonish me with their blindness.
But this is a story, and I know that it's for effec sorry if I was rude.
It was really a good chapter. However, why is it called a "default" chapter?
Anyway.
Thank you for the chapter. |
 MaMa HedgeHog 8/28/08 . chapter 5Damn that was pretty..possibly the best EriolTomoya story I've ever read..Pretty's too tame..it was stunning. As much as I want to punch Kaho..I still feel bad for her..Great Job! |
 the-coconut-bubble 4/4/08 . chapter 5Amazing. This is how it should've happened. Tomoyo-chan doesn't deserve anything less, even if it's Eriol denser-than-concrete-walls Hiiragizawa.
My heart goes out to Kaho, though. I hope she found someone too. |
 meepers369 6/5/07 . chapter 5UM. -gibbles incoherently- Just want to say that I've loved this. So much. |
 Crying Sorceress 5/29/07 . chapter 5This took my breath away and left me speechless.
I shouldn't say more because then it'd contradict the speechless part. But yes. This fic was THAT good. You. Are. An. Amazing. Author. And Da Jie is Mandarin.
Oh well, I guess that I said more than I was supposed to.*throws smoke bomb, vanishes* |
 Autumn Dusk 3/28/07 . chapter 5 Loved the story. Good job.
Actually, 'Da-jie' isn't cantonese-it's mandarin. I should know. I'm Chinese, after all. I'm not fluent in Cantonese but I'm pretty sure it's different. You were right about everything else though. It's strange to see Chinese written in English...) |
 drinktea 3/14/07 . chapter 5(If I could type out a contented humming noise, it'd be here.
So wonderful wonderful wonderful. I'm happy they got a happy ending, and I'm happy Kaho's story doesn't seem to be over yet either. Sakura |
 Clow12391 3/1/07 . chapter 5wonderful story! i loved it |
 AniMeViEtGrl 8/16/06 . chapter 1yay! that was a good chapter! Kaho is getting annoying by the chapter |
 asga 8/7/06 . chapter 1i read again this story for the second time and I am still loving it 6 and I am glad on the third arc you still make them together I dont hate Kaho but I dont like Kaho and Eriol and I am gld u handle her that way keep up ne |
 joviality 8/1/06 . chapter 5You really spend a lot of effort writing this ne? I'm impressed by the research you've done, like the Chinese legend for example. The Goddess' name is Chang Er by the way. You got the legend mostly right (and I can't remember the whole story to tell them to you, haha). I'm a Chinese if you have guessed by now
And it's a pleasant surprise to see Da jie, Er jie, etc spelt correctly. It's kinda weird when some authors want to use these Chinese words but they used it wrongly.
And I appreciated the glossary after each chapter. I don't really understand Jap much. Even though I have learnt quite a few words reading through many CCS fanfics, hah. But it's sometimes frustrating to read a Jap word and don't know what it means. This doesn't happen in your fic.
I'm impressed by the way you handled Kaho. To me, and I think a quite some fanfic authors would agree with me, 3rd party is very difficult to write. You managed to bring out her insecurity, her hostility, her behaviour very well, in a way where as a reader, I sympathise with her.
The relationships between other characters were also well-written, very canon.
It’s been really enjoyable reading this fic, and I’m a bit disappointed to come to the end. One of the best E/T fics I’ve read. You really did a wonderful job. Thank you for sharing this with the fellow E/T shippers ) |
 Reiyuka 7/12/06 . chapter 5*sniffles* Dammit! You've got me crying again.
Honestly, I really dislike Kaho in this fic for her blindness to Eriols feelings. But I love everyone/everything else. At first I was a bit surprised at Tomoyo's request, but I think that it is quite realistic.
Now -that- particular scene... it makes me wish that my first time will be somewhat like that. Even if it's a tiny bit like that, I'll be blessed and happy.
Thank you for writing this. |
 Sigh 6/21/06 . chapter 5 I must say that I found this fanfic to be one of the most fantastic fanfic I read of Eriol and Tomoyo relationship.
I hope you keep up your writing. I really enjoyed read this. |