 Captain Weirdo 2009-12-06 . chapter 26This is shiveringly good! Must be a very fun game. :) So glad to see Clarisse enjoying life, even though demons still occasionally haunt her. Glad to see she deals with it. Great story!
cw |
 risingdancer 2009-12-06 . chapter 26August was approaching :D :D
I can't wait either. |
 Captain Weirdo 2009-12-06 . chapter 25"All evening long three out of five of Joe´s senses had been under heavy attack." - Brilliant!
Loved this chapter - Clarisse's preparations and the five out of five and now I'm eagerly anticipating San Francisco. Can't wait!
cw |
 Captain Weirdo 2009-12-06 . chapter 24Damn their interruptions! hahaha!
cw |
 Ilane 2009-12-06 . chapter 26Very nice chapter. Who would have thought board games could be used that way? :) I loved how you melded the flashbacks into the story line without really writing them out. Joseph is so understanding and kind and really cute to our favourite Queen. Can't wait for updates (I know: I shouldn't talk. I'll finish my new chapter today or tomorrow and send it over. Promise!)
LG Andrea |
 daytonagirl 2009-11-29 . chapter 25 lovin' it. Exellent, very well written. Cant wait for the next chapter:) |
 Ilane 2009-11-29 . chapter 25Cute! I was literally muttering 'finally' under my breath. Just a tiny remark. Women tend not to forget too easily and Clarisse will certainly have flashbacks when Joe touches or kisses her.
Andrea |
 zephiey 2009-11-29 . chapter 25It is so nice to see them back almost together and back to their pre-kidnap comfort level. |
 risingdancer 2009-11-29 . chapter 25Aww, I loved this chapter. It was so cute, and it's good to have them back in this "friendship". And, I can't wait until San Fransico. :D |
 risingdancer 2009-11-14 . chapter 24I'm sp glad this chapter is finally up!
They seem to be getting back to their normal closeness.
I'd like to read more about both of their points of views on those few minutes before and after the kidnapper was killed too. |
 fantasyinmymind 2009-11-14 . chapter 24Another great chapter. But, what is Clarisse's recollection? Look forward to more. Once the entire story is done - then I'll go back and re-read everything. |
 Ilane 2009-11-14 . chapter 24That was absolutely amazing. I didn't think she would freak out for that reason. She is definetly coming round though. I loved the talk and how Joseph was reassuring her. I even laughed. 'Monet was too smart to finish his line.' I could see that in my mind and laughed out loud not expecting the joke and the cup was also very funny.
Will B reappear or Mia? I still think Mia should kind of find out what happened. And could be trained in self-defense or the security protocol. Well, it was just a thought.
Terrific job and update soon please.
Andrea |
 negschainsaw 2009-11-14 . chapter 24^^ eindelijk! Ik denk dat Joe en Clarisse nu eindelijk eens kunnen slapen :)
ik vind het mentaal voorbijflitsen van de gebeurtenis zeer goed! je kunt het zo gebruiken in een film!
blijven verder doen! ;) |
 HSM-LucasScip 2009-11-08 . chapter 23Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it! Please continue!! xx |
 Marni 2009-11-07 . chapter 23 It's high time they started talking!
Thanks for a great chapter. |