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Captain Weirdo
2009-12-06 . chapter 26
This is shiveringly good! Must be a very fun game. :) So glad to see Clarisse enjoying life, even though demons still occasionally haunt her. Glad to see she deals with it. Great story!

cw
risingdancer
2009-12-06 . chapter 26
August was approaching :D :D
I can't wait either.
Captain Weirdo
2009-12-06 . chapter 25
"All evening long three out of five of Joe´s senses had been under heavy attack." - Brilliant!

Loved this chapter - Clarisse's preparations and the five out of five and now I'm eagerly anticipating San Francisco. Can't wait!

cw
Captain Weirdo
2009-12-06 . chapter 24
Damn their interruptions! hahaha!

cw
Ilane
2009-12-06 . chapter 26
Very nice chapter. Who would have thought board games could be used that way? :) I loved how you melded the flashbacks into the story line without really writing them out. Joseph is so understanding and kind and really cute to our favourite Queen. Can't wait for updates (I know: I shouldn't talk. I'll finish my new chapter today or tomorrow and send it over. Promise!)

LG Andrea
daytonagirl
2009-11-29 . chapter 25
lovin' it. Exellent, very well written. Cant wait for the next chapter:)
Ilane
2009-11-29 . chapter 25
Cute! I was literally muttering 'finally' under my breath. Just a tiny remark. Women tend not to forget too easily and Clarisse will certainly have flashbacks when Joe touches or kisses her.

Andrea
zephiey
2009-11-29 . chapter 25
It is so nice to see them back almost together and back to their pre-kidnap comfort level.
risingdancer
2009-11-29 . chapter 25
Aww, I loved this chapter. It was so cute, and it's good to have them back in this "friendship". And, I can't wait until San Fransico. :D
risingdancer
2009-11-14 . chapter 24
I'm sp glad this chapter is finally up!
They seem to be getting back to their normal closeness.
I'd like to read more about both of their points of views on those few minutes before and after the kidnapper was killed too.
fantasyinmymind
2009-11-14 . chapter 24
Another great chapter. But, what is Clarisse's recollection? Look forward to more. Once the entire story is done - then I'll go back and re-read everything.
Ilane
2009-11-14 . chapter 24
That was absolutely amazing. I didn't think she would freak out for that reason. She is definetly coming round though. I loved the talk and how Joseph was reassuring her. I even laughed. 'Monet was too smart to finish his line.' I could see that in my mind and laughed out loud not expecting the joke and the cup was also very funny.
Will B reappear or Mia? I still think Mia should kind of find out what happened. And could be trained in self-defense or the security protocol. Well, it was just a thought.
Terrific job and update soon please.

Andrea
negschainsaw
2009-11-14 . chapter 24
^^ eindelijk! Ik denk dat Joe en Clarisse nu eindelijk eens kunnen slapen :)

ik vind het mentaal voorbijflitsen van de gebeurtenis zeer goed! je kunt het zo gebruiken in een film!

blijven verder doen! ;)
HSM-LucasScip
2009-11-08 . chapter 23
Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it! Please continue!! xx
Marni
2009-11-07 . chapter 23
It's high time they started talking!
Thanks for a great chapter.
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