aw! that was so awesome! Great job!

I LOVE this one-shot. Every time I read a fic where they take a visit to the future, they always see the bad future. This is the first that I've read where they see the GOOD future. I just love the reactions of future Piper and future Leo to past Chris. Oh, and what's also unique with your concept is that it allowed you to go farther in the revelation and revealed to them that past Chris will die for Wyatt. Also, brilliant writing. Your emotion-filled writing just keep on bringing me to tears.

I really liked your take on the revelation stuff. The interactions between all the characters was really good. Please write more Charmed stories ;)

aww this one is so sweet. and good call on the final episode. I'm so sad that charmed finished. i'd have loved it to jump forward for series 9 and have chris and wyatt fighting instead of the sisters

I really liked this story but there was one part that a typo made me laugh. You said Wyatt and Chris "worked in sink" while trying to contain the Charmed Ones and Past Chris. That's pretty funny that they were working in a sink. Must have been a tight fit. I think you meant to say "worked in synche." Other than that the story was great. Your dialgue is missing a lot of punctuation but it didn't distract me too much from reading this. I'd like to read more of this kind of story.

well that's one way to screw the family's heads up ;) a fantastic fic, one of the many wonderful and better ways for the revelation. i hope you do more charmed fics soon!

Good

excellent one shot

Awesome, the best, excellent, wonderful,and... and... I love this story and even though its a one-shot, its the best. I have a idea slightly similar to this and when I get an account... One thing, its kind of a pet-pevve-thing - Chris was 23 when he died. I also love the idea that Chris might remember.

Great job!!

Aw this was lovely! You had a great idea! XD

oh i love it:]

wow you made me cry wow