I liked the beginning! Also, I kept on reading and then it occured to me that something was different. It was only towards the end that I realized that instead of being Japanes, these guys are Indians and Pakistani here! lol. I'm so used to Indian culture, I completely missed the cultural changes here. :D

Going to read the second part now but I already know this is going to be on my favourites List.

That was great! I loved the twist of this story! Keep up the good work!

i enjoyed reading this and the AU choise is fascinating! very well written and amazing: all the characters r distinctly themselves in their new setting fitting their new roles.

Oh MY GOD! Its finally frigging coming true. My first fanfiction where there's an Indian setting! Yeah! *jumps up and down* And it's not bad either. Actually, it's pretty good. I like the way the whole police thing is portrayed. Oh, it reminds me of how 'reliable' those son-of-a-* can be. It was funny how Sasuke was introduced. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll be reading the second chapter! XD

I so love your idea of Naruto coming with him :D

What an awesome idea for a setting - the idea of Konoha as a slum made me grin, and you pulled it off really well. Awesome characterization of Naruto and the rest of the cast as well - the only thing I dislike about this fic is that it isn't longer :D

-laughs- you slip taj mahal in and Hritik Roushan! I know that guy! I used to watch bollywood, believe that -laughs-

You really set this in India...-laughs- makes me want to do that, setting my fanfic in Indonesia and put Borobudur, The Great Mosque of Demak or even make them all muslim -laughs-

Your story is amusing -grins-

I tried to imagine sakura chewed paan and failed miserably...if I'm not mistaken the meaning, it's called 'sirih' here.

And from the beginning, I had guessed that you were India, haha, silly me :3

I'd reviewed this in Lj but I thought I wanna support you here too. (What a shame that there'd be no sequel)

thanx for sharing your amazing work

Very impressive. n.n I've never seen someone use Indian culture before. I've really enjoyed reading this.

(Sorry my review isn't long and sappy like I want it to be, but it's five in the morning here. I stayed up two hours later than usual JUST to read this. Don't you feel special? :D You should. lol. )

You're right, it was deeper and darker than most fics, but I thought it was really great. You managed to keep the essence of the original Naruto story, but in a completely different world. Really good.

Of course that snake bastard is the one behind it. He is such a creeper.

Great chapter. I'm really enjoyed this story!

Wow, really great start.

i luv dis story

itachis not da bad guy like everyone thinks he is

yay!