 Obsidian And Cobalt 9/3/11 . chapter 1Epic win...I need a cold shower XD |
 Cornie 8/25/11 . chapter 1 Please, I beg you! Follow it! Do not leave it in only one chapter, the story is too good :D! |
 Major Mike Powell III 4/25/11 . chapter 1Well, well, soldier...
THIS...was...AW3SOME!
LOL At Ritsu and Azusa's begging. Too...much...moe Powa'! X_x
Oh yeah, and...The cake is a lie!
LMAO
ROFL
Sorry! I just HAD to say that! XD
And THEN! WHOA!
THAT'S what I call "making out"! :DDDDDD THAT was...just...X3
And of course, the mushy talk and the "I love you"s were just an added bonus! O
Helluva job, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
 creepy fanboy 7/3/09 . chapter 1 fap fap fap fap fap fap fap |
 Hyperion184 6/10/09 . chapter 1Oh please tell me you're going to continue this fic? I LOVE IT! It's well written, and it seems like something that could happen. Please update. |
 Dooter-Space-Shooter 5/30/09 . chapter 1I love this, thanks for writing it |
 Kode Dekka 5/30/09 . chapter 1if I have any complaint its the use of the word chagrin, brings back so many painful twilight related memories. But yes I creamed my pants reading this, nice work lol/ |
 Ignoramus 1O3 5/30/09 . chapter 1What'd I say about doing yourself down? I loved it! Awesome job! :D I'm just so happy to see some proper Ui/Yui up here (my fave pairing, heh).
Perfectly cute I can just picture them doing this in an episode great characterisation! Keep it up! _ |