Good show of emotions here.

I don't know why your stories don't get more reviews. They are extremely well written and poignant beyond belief. You have a great talent.
I shall read more since I just discovered your work. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

BEAUTIFUL.

aww this was heart breaking! I'm crying! great story though! well written and great idea (though I really hope Ziva does not die on the show)