   Caelice 6/22/05 . chapter 1wow, okay story, but a load of pointless swearing. maybe you should cut back on the swearing, but other than that, the story was pretty okay |
| Heather 6/9/04 . chapter 1 I like. But cut back on the bad ass fucking word |
| DemonRogue 5/11/04 . chapter 1 interesting so far i like it |
| RP 4eva 1/25/03 . chapter 1 Must have more. Need more. Author must write more. |
| LadyTrunks 11/21/02 . chapter 1 I like what you have so far. I hope you decide to continue it. |
| Foamy 10/10/02 . chapter 1 great put up chapter 2 soon. PLEASE |
| me 6/7/02 . chapter 1 bloody hell thats a load of swear words... |
| OoOTheGreatPretenderOoO 3/26/02 . chapter 1 you got to write more this is pretty damb good |
| RachLeigh13 1/18/02 . chapter 1 Ohh, PLEASE WRITE MOR! |
| A Silvan Elf 1/7/02 . chapter 1 Why can't the baby be Pietro's? It's really good. |
| tom 1/2/02 . chapter 1 it's R-O-G-U-E |
| Lucky439 1/1/02 . chapter 1 more please i really like the begging please write more |
| woodencat 12/31/01 . chapter 1 come on. what happens, I personly like it when one member of one team likes a member of the other team. please finish it. |
| Mirgonus3 12/29/01 . chapter 1 Interseting well it is different i will keep reading. |
| Catgirl 12/26/01 . chapter 1 cool keep going! |
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