Woh.. this is amazing

Woh.. this is amazing

Ah... It's beautiful. Your writing is amazing. I am usually a silent(-or may you call mute, since it is rare for me to review-)reader, but this fic... Oh, I'll be guilty if I do not review. don't lose hope.

...I wish there was so much more of this, even though it's absolutely perfect as it is. I just want more.

Marvolous.

Tha wa freakin' . . . AWSOME.

I don't think awsome is the right word but I can't do much better. My vocab i limited.

Awh, that made me want to cry. It was so sweet and so heartbreaking.

You, my friend, are an excellent writer. This is very impressive and kept me hooked throughout the entire thing.

I don't think this story is anything to be ashamed of. It's a great piece.

I think I love you. There were two or three parts where I wasn't sure what was going on, but the story is great over all.

You need to write more Near and B.

Defenitly B.

I loved that B! That was so good. I really love you style and work. Your Nate was cute too!

I'm a little insulted at how you view your writing. After reading Pais Philos and Nekros Philos and having a spiraling array of horrid childhood memories brought back to me in a web of terrifyingly spun black widow's silk, I was sure that by now you would have a better opinion of your abilities. Suck it up and refrain from insulting your writing within your stories. It's a slap in the face to your fans and a slap in the face to yourself, something that you definitely don't deserve. You don't write stories at this caliber and then expect most of us to understand when you break down and say that it sucks. Have a little faith. Or at least pretend to.

Your self-hatred is competely unreasonable.

What I like about this is that it's not all 'rape-toture' that most B-fics mutate into, their relationship is twisted and odd, but I like that. You portary them brilliantly in your own setting.

Very, very interesting story. You are by far good enough; your writing is beautiful. B is quite interesting and I loved the way you portrayed Near. The idea is wonderful too. Very nicely written story.

awesome story.
I was a little annoyed that the aunts name was Erica. Because that's my name. And I don't like to share.
But other than that, AWESOME! I love B. Even if he is a jam eating creep.

Hi there! Wonderfully written story, it was effectively depressing and creepy lol. I am very taken with B as a blonde with blue eyes that's a novel idear! I actually read all the reviews as well and DITTO. I love your writing.

It's natural to have doubts and troubles and periods of self-loathing with writing or anything of that sort; it's great you're using writing as a catharsis! You have enormous writing potential, and unique style of writing, it's like atmospheric and hypnotic, and absorbing lol like a sponge. err... That's the wine talking. But seriously, kick those negative feelings in the ass. With some writing. Cos that way we all win LOL...