This is a really good start

interesting beginning

oh my god!

i swear to got i loved it!

no its an understatement!it was so good, thanks so much for telling me about it, the beginning is superb, wow, now my stry really will suck infront of yours!

very good work, cant wait to find out what happens, that was edward right?, hmm i think so!

i loved it, truly loved it, freaking good!

please update soon, pretty please, or else i will keep bothering u by my mails!

update soon

take care

anshu

dame that was really good for a first chapter :)