Humans are remarkably adaptable. It's a nice way to view the human species, from a view point that is so alien and not even biological similar. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

Well. That was...odd. Starscream actually leaving, I mean. With a minimum (for Starscream) of "stop crying so I can have whatever conversation I came here for."

this is a very well thought out and writen story. It shows a good intereaction bnetween the two main characters...please do continue it.

hmm...very interesting!

This is very interesting!

Whatever is Starscream up to now? I'm loving how you portray his scientific side.

Very intriguing. I'm loving this depiction of Starscream as it is holding true to his nature. I was highly entertained by his devious, snarky internal dialogue which is some of the best I've read in awhile. And your descriptions are lovely as well; hard to find strong writers like you on fanfiction :)

A little constructive criticism: You're a bit too random with your "human" interactions/conversations. Though they are most likely Starscream's observations of her mundane life they really distract from the truly awesome interactions between Hope and Starscream. I'd advise less of those to make your story flow more smoothly. Easily fixed.

Keep it up! I'll definitely keep reading this one!

starscream needs to learn sensitivity but i bet he'll come crawling back to hope

You're one of very few authors I trust with this type of plot. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes.

love it so far, looking fwd to updates

I've never really thought of Starscream as having interaction with humans, but when you look at it from a scientific point of view it makes sense. He's not as 'brute strength' as the others so he can be more sneaky and cunning about it. I look forward to the next update.

wow, this chapter captured starscreams attitude perfectly! cant wait for the next update

Very interesting ^^

Wow! that was fantastically awesome! I don't believe I have ever read a fic that could so perfectly capture Starscream's scientific attitude as well as his inherent disgust for all things human.

The first 3/4 of the chapter was like reading a scientific log written by Screamer himself; not many writers capitalize on that aspect of his past, but that was beautifully done and adds another colorful facet to this devious Decepticon.

And speaking of devious, the way you portrayed Screamer using his scientific study of Hope to capture her trust was just phenominal. It was so sadistically ironic to be reading one thing Screamer was saying, only to have him thinking completely the opposite. The best deciever in the Con ranks surely earns his stripes in this chapter. I myself was almost beleiving all those honey-coated words myself. Nicely done.

I can tell much thought and process has been devoted to this fic, and I will be the first to say it is much appreciated and thanks for sharing. Do please continue!

Cheers!

"She was a weak, overemotional human. Of course Starscream had never been like that."

ROFL! Says the Decepticon who is permanently PMSing. Love it! Keep up the great work.

Can't wait for the update. Loved the first part :)