AAH

This was so good. Maybe a little wordily worded but you're dealing with complex ideas. And you do it well.

I DISLIKE THAT YOU LEAVE THIS ON A CLIFFHANGER but the manga does too so I guess I can't fault you that. Damn.

Write more Royai woman!

This was a powerful chapter. Royai ftw. I hate the Manga creator for Chapter 100.

SPOILER DO NOT LOOK BELOW OH GOD!

Yeah, I hated this. I know she could still be alive, but somehow.. I doubt it. This will be a major hit if she ends up being killed off. It'd mean no one is really that safe. D:

Short and sweet; the way I love 'em.

Great job once against A. LaRosa. You continue to amaze me.

Intense. I think you can definitely add more, it feels like it lacks some more details about the exact natures of Winry's fears and impatience.

But a good job of mixing her want and her fear. ^_^

Ha, ha. "Did I just get my personality evaluated by a bunch of Jellybeans?"

Priceless. ^_^

ROFL. Roy giving Ed love advice is pretty comical, since he hasn't been able to fess up either. Good balance of that fact and Ed's inability to confess either and Roy's answer to the "What do I get out of this?"

^-^

Well done.

Oh wow, that last bit was hilarious. LOL. ^_^

Aw, ha, ha. Kittens are cute. Yup, Ed would never admit that.

Welcome to the Rockbell school of Pyschology.

Fun to be had by all involved.

A very touching chapter in this. I honestly love your writing. I don't know how anyone could not. The way you handle the romance, the fluff, and the.. *ahem*.. you know-- it's just so wonderful. Keep it up!

Oh my, indeed, so much meaning packed into such a short fic - it's quite wonderful. :3 I love the mere notion of it--especially Winry's attitude towards the black jellybeans, so characteristic and cute :3--and I think you did real wonders with this prompt. x3

that was really funny and cute! write more very soon!

Poor Ed, he really is a bean. XD He's a yummy jellybean! This chapter did make a bit of sense. I still liked it though.

Aw, Parental!Roy and Edc is so sweet. I really love how Roy was practically coahing Ed through his feelings. But then he had to ruin it with the last sentence. XD That's Roy for you. And Ed is so adorkable in this one.

o.O I can totally see this happening. Roy is such a dork! XD I guess Riza really wants those paperwork done!