| Reviews for The Perfect Plan |
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Anika Humphrey 4/8/13 . chapter 29Awesome and incredible i loved this story |
SilenceIsCompliance 6/20/12 . chapter 29I really really like this story! It is amazing! Like, I read it twice in a row. And I want to read more by you, especially next gen Harry Potter (although I will certainly check out your other stories!). It seemed like sometimes you were going to elaborate on something, and then forgot about it. One example of this is when Sabastian days that he can handle the Weasley temper and the other guys look at him strangely. You do this a lot of times and I would really like one shots or explanations of them, because I am really curious. I would also like to know what happens with the other couples. Like with Hugo and Beth, what happened with them? I would love to read a story about them. Or a quick little one-shot about how Rose and Scor got what about a Syria and John? Also, ehat about Hayden and Roxy- did they get together or did she move on and find someone else, and what dido he do? You have me so immersed in your next gen world an I just want to read more and know everything. I cannot explain how much I liked this story. It was by far the best Lily Luna relationship story I have ever read, an by far the least OOC. I loved it SO MUCH! It was witty (like when Christopher says the "I love Lucy" thing), adorable, and in general excellent. Absolutely remarkable! Well done! |
Ice Skating Lover 3/31/12 . chapter 29It was a great story, but you made Syria act like to little of a girl in the begining! But anyways it was one of the best stories about the Next gerneration I have read! |
LeviosaChatterbox 12/29/11 . chapter 29I'm in love with this story! I only just finished reading it now. The best part was that you added the little malfoys in. Because I'm a ScoRose shipper I found it awesome that Lilly was paired with a Malfoy just not Scorpious but Sebastian which was very creative. In a way they remind me of Lily Evans and James potter because she used to hate him and then they became head girl and head boy. It was one the most interesting creative and cutest stories I've read. |
Music Cures All 9/24/11 . chapter 29Awwwws... |
Guest 8/23/11 . chapter 29 Really good. Really cute ending and epiluoge. I loved chapter 28, it was so cute! PeaceLoveBrownies Jenn |
thestarlitrose 4/14/11 . chapter 29I rarely read Lily Luna stories because she usually ends up with Scorpius. I prefer Rose/Scorp stories. Anyways I really enjoyed this :) |
Foxtail-Padfoot 10/11/10 . chapter 29Awwww, we fanfictioners are as a community so frikkin cheesy. I love it. I've spent most of the past five hours reading this fanfiction straight through, and I have to say I love it. Fabulous job, dahlin'! Love and hugs, Fox |
slytherinslut13 2/10/10 . chapter 5The best made plans of mice and men often go awry! I'm not sure, but I feel like this *might* be a Lily/ James repeat... Nah!(sarcasm) Rose |
MyLifeIsAverage 2/6/10 . chapter 16i don't mean to seem rude, but what 12 year old acts like that? when i was 12 i certinly didn't |
silverspigot 1/10/10 . chapter 29I spent all of today reading this.(with several detours, of course) No other LilyXOC story can match yours.(despite the random peculiarity) I have got to say, the time I wasted was worth it. |
ArtChica 12/30/09 . chapter 10I love Syria! Especially that last comment about the two being like Rose and Scorp! |
ElaineAbbene 12/27/09 . chapter 29really liked this story, very well written with lots of witty dialog and sexual tension/chemistry between the characters. One detail at the end, is all babies are born with blue eyes, and they don't start turning colors till later. My sister has the darkest brown eyes ever and had darker blue eyes at birth so the doctor could tell they would be brown. Mine were blue and changed to a greenish hazel. Just in case you write another story with a baby, it's not really worth changing, but I just thought I would mention it. Great story. Thanks for the nice read. |
Cottonpaw 12/8/09 . chapter 29ah it's over? I don't know what to do with my life now! That story was amazing; definately one of my all time favourites. I'll definately be on the lookout for more of your wonderful work in the future :) |
kt.potter93 12/8/09 . chapter 29aww, nice chapter :) |