Oh my gosh! This is getting intense! That Shiro! Now for some drama-Derek has to save the life of his nurse!

Oh holy crap, I'm so sorry it took me this long to review! I feel terrible!

In any case, wtf did that Shiro chick DO to Angie when she "drew her blood"?! That syringe was probably laced with something. ARGH. Anyway, looking forward to the update!

I know how frustrating it is losing pages of material and just being so ** that you don't want to write it again... sorry :(

Even though there were a few blips here and there in the first chapter, I saw a lot of improvement in the second chapter. I love the little conversations and jokes here and there - they made me giggle, especially when Tyler is involved.

Though I still have a feeling its the researcher, I'll still be reading - I'm looking forward to where it goes! Keep up the good work. :)

man that is funny (is on the floor laughing her head off)

Whoa, this looks really good. But something about that Shiro Bara chick doesn't sit right with me... especially seeing as the enemy put a WHITE feather on the end table, and shiro means white. I guess I'll just have to wait and see huh?

Oh, and, hooray for first review! I'll say it like I say on other fics that I get the privelege of having the first review - don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. If readers are anything like me, they can read chapters but may or may not have the time to review them. So, every once in a while, check your story stats. It'll tell you how many hits and visitors (individual IP addresses) have clicked on your story. You may just be pleasantly surprised!