 Princess JasminKS 9/17/11 . chapter 9this is soooooo one of my favourite stories |
 zfj 5/5/11 . chapter 9nice work |
 Jrik23 5/2/09 . chapter 9The last chapter was a bit much...Good story. No point to the Paris Miles accident. |
 supersaiyaman 3/20/08 . chapter 5 i wonder why they didbn rilize it before and i woonder how she will react. |
 supersaiyaman 3/20/08 . chapter 3 i cant beleve they havent put it together yert if she looks like bra and sound like her than she progbably is bra |
 Juunanagou 17 6/27/07 . chapter 4She should've at least revealed herself to her mother, or at least Vegeta would've told Bulma to spare her the grief. :( |
 Saiya-jin Spice 8/18/03 . chapter 9I've been so busy this whole summer, that I barely had time to read anything. x_x; I was finally able to finish reading this story though, and I'm so happy! I LOVED this story...the ending was perfect. Happy and sweet. =^_^= Excellent job! |
 Saiya-jin Spice 2/22/03 . chapter 1I really like this story so far! It isn't plain at all, and it instantly caught my interest! It's pretty original so far to! Keep it up! ^_^ |
 son gomay vidal goku 1/9/03 . chapter 9 i love this fic cause it's b/g and p/t i love those to couples! and i think pan and trunks should have a son first and bra and goten should have a daughter first and it's this way in this fic with is another reason i love it so much! |
 nOy 11/24/02 . chapter 9 Tis is such a gr8 story! I love it soo DEEP..i read 1 chp and didn't stop til the END! I'm glad it's complete r else me go crazy waiting for the endin! hope 2 c ur new 1! |
 7/17/02 . chapter 9 You have become one of my favorite authors Moon Star. This was one of the best Bra and Goten stories that I have ever read. I'll be waiting for more soon although I know how busy you are. There, I've said it. Let's see what else you will cook for us next.
MS ~Throughout Summary~ |
 MS 7/17/02 . chapter 8 I totally want this chapter for myself. It was written like a masterpiece. The chase, the talk, the river, the stars... if I go on then this will never end. I'll sight everytime I read this chapter.
MS ~Cuddle Time~ |
 MS 7/17/02 . chapter 7 It truly was confessions of the heart on this chapter. At least we found somethings reavealed for this to get some background. I said it before but I'll say it again, I love they way you write Moon Star. You get great plots and put them into paper and get a good story for us, the readers, to read and enjoy. Two more chapters to go now... I can't wait to see what else goes on. (Loved the Muse. I want one too.)
MS ~Hearwarming~ |
 MS 7/17/02 . chapter 6 I wanted Bra to win. I'm going to whine for some time here. I hope no one minds at the house. Why coudln't she win? I'll ask that to myself instead of burdening you with it.
MS ~Some Butt Never Hurt Anybody~ |
 MS 7/17/02 . chapter 5 I love that song. I don't think that it really did fit the bill and she singing it but it was still a good chapter. Still White to the finally. I think that this was one of the best chapters with a lot of interaction.
MS ~Great Twist~ |