I've never read a fic like this so it's an original. I think it is a nice start and continue writing. Write more for the next chapter girl and hurry with the updating.

I LOVE IT, I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!

OMG, this is really good! Continue! _

-I Love It- I want to know what will happen with her and Goten. Start writing girl, I want the next chapter now!

Nice beginning, can't wait for Goten to see her. Someone has to recognize her here. Hurry!

Hi girl! You began a new story. Update soon please! Karen Glad you wrote again.

Please continue!