Awwww...I REALLY like the way this ended! . Can you write more? PLZ? If I ask really really REALLY nicely? With a cherry on top? But even if you don't, I thought this was a really great story and I applaude you! BRAVO!

awe come on! noooo it can't end that way! *starts chanting sequel* this is such a gooooo0ood story!

But...but...but you stop right there! What about Trunks and Pan? Are you just gonna leave their problems in the air? YA can't do that to us! Please! Make a sequel!

I loved it. It was so sweet and nice.

Awwwww...*grins*...that's so cute!...*giggles*...i'm glad they finally worked things out...i really loved this story...i thought it was ABSOLUTEYLY WONDERFUL!...if you don't feel that great about the epilogue...you could always write a sequel...*hint hint*...you know...tie up all those loose ends and stuff...*winks*...heheeee!...sorry...can't help it...i just love this fic too much...*grins*...i'm sorry that you were so sick...sheesh...i'm surprised you got to write this at all...you sounded pretty bad there...i hope you are feeling better now...*grins*...well, gotta go...lol...later peep...;D

I"V BIN WAITING FOREVER FOR A NEW CHAP! PLEASE HURRY! THANX!

Long time, it's been over a wekk girl, almost two. I can't take it anymore. You either update or I'll hunt you down like, like... like what you are. Just Hurry, I don't take tortures well.

Tamara _

Been a long time since I've reviewed. Sorry, I loved this chapter. I want a next chapter, hurry with it it's been a long time.

Karen

Pleae update, please update! I'm going crazy here and you enjoy torturing us, don't you. !HURRY!

HELLOOOOOOO! I Just absolutly loved this chapter! Goten and Bra actually confessed that they had some lusty feeling after that first kiss o theirs? Its so exciting thinking about what the next chapter could possibley turn out to be like _.
But I have something to confess myself...

My favorite part was...well you dont want to know... Well OK, it was when Goten lifted his hand up her back , under her shirt. I love the romantic kind of scenes.
I cant beleive how LONG the chapter was it was so cool. I like long chapters!...Well most of the time.
I have an unexspectedly 2nd fav.
It was the part where Bra told Goten about Goku and Vegeta knowing about Bra being gone for so long. I bet that Goten was shocked. Espesially if Goku knew Goten liked Bra, and never even told HIM! Poor Goten. Sob He didnt mean to hurt Bra so much, I mean good GREIF! But I thought the sadest part of the chapter was , when Bra was waiting for Goten to answer her question about if he felt any thing after the first kiss between them. And Bra just had to cry...Made me sad to hear that.
But any way...My 3rd favorite part of the chapter was, when Bra was telling Goten about the time jokes he played on her in the turned her shampoo into hair RED HAIR DYE! Hweewww that was weird. I mean, My mom would NEVER let me dye my hair RED! But I guess Bra didnt even mean to do it but...

Ok ,the other joke Was also funny that Goten did blaming it on Trunks that he stole all of Bras keys and capsules, to where she cant even drive any where, and have to walk in her high heels! I mean, that would really hurt wouldnt it?
I am dyeing for the next chapter! I cant figure out what is gonna happen to Goten and Bra. Are they gonna stay close in relationship?
Are they gonna get married just like pan and Trunks did?
Well maybe not...Because Goten and bra are too immature for that. NAW just kiddn , Of course they arent. GOTEN and BRA FOREVER!

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Umm...getting a little crazy here so Ill talk to ya soon...Hehe...

! Jane!

waiting 4 a new chap!

oo, this chappie was really good! keep up the good work!

oo... this is my favorite chapter so far!

this is all so good!)

ok, i want bra 2 tell them her real identity!