That was trully romantic...!
I dont know, but i could feel my heart raced towards the ending, and this is my fave;


“We are meant to be together. I told you once. Now see,” he said, kissing her hair.

How romantic ~!

I think u r a good writer If it were me, I'd let my emotion take control and create an ugly Hikaru. ^^

. . .
What. The. Heck.

This chapter is awesome.
((Haha I knew it would work out!! I KNEW IT KNEW IT KNEW IT!))

Lol. But is this really the end? :( Waah! :'( Well at least they're happy~

w w w . w r i t e r m g . w e b s . c o m

Glad to see you've finally got round to posting the epilogue. I like the way it ended. After all they've been through... it ended up to be actually pre-arranged? Meh... My mind says thee doth protest too much, my dear Nadeshiko. That's good news... 'cos both Nokoru and her will have no problems cementing their relationship then... =D

You're happy, I'm happy... and your fic's happy (if the ending is anything of an indication). It does fit the term epilogue, so there's not much critique there.

All in all.. good way to end the fic. =D

Thank you for the epilogue

I guess you did okay and really good. ^_^

unexpected but nice ending...jawar age monta bhalo hoe galo!!thank u sweety...

(for 5th chappie)
aw! it's ending? already?

but the metaphors and introspection, etc., was awesome a the end...

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Gosh, it's the final? That was wonderful, Andie!!
i love it XD

My review muse as left me at the door but I shall try to give it my best.

As you know, I'm not a Clamp follower but being a fandom surfer, I read a variety of fanfics.

Hmm.. I don't know how I should put this but yay! for Nokoru and Nadeshiko!

It's perfectly understandable that Nokoru is taken aback by Hikaru's seemingly careless shrugging of the situation. But then again, she's into Idomu now.

At least they parted in good terms. Not sure what would happen should it be otherwise.

Also... I see you've adopted the dialogue format I've told you about! It's nice to see it put into use. =)

Anyway, nice chapter.

C. Isabel

In my opinion, I thought the chairman's reaction would be like this ( sorry I just can't remember the name, I have short-lived memory) : shock , then he'd be sad and try to smile and greet his bestfriend instead of using his cold voice (?) It's because : first : his friend doesn't know she's his girlfriend , 2nd: he's already known/felt something wrong with their love, she was distracted in their date before, right? last: he's a feminist and he's TOO KIND ( that's why I don't like him) so maybe he'd not show her how sad/hurt he was .
But who knows, one could act differently in that situation T__T girl friend and best friend T__T I pity him.
Looking at the bright side: Huray, fic changes to chairman - Nadeshiko pairing ^^
I like ur chairman more than himself in the manga, not too much of a feminist, has someone special, not acting gentlemanly all the time and more jovial.
Keep up the good work, Andie.

I like Nadeshiko , Wa, I love her, I like her personality .
Hikaru cheated on him ?

Hope the one who heard them wasn't the chairman , I don't like him but he's a good person . And I'd be really really sad knowing the one I like compares me to s.o else
And hope the person is not Suoh.

I havenot watched the anime yet so I don't know the girl.
To tell the truth, I don't really like Nokoru. I don't like people who are too kind like him T__T His girlfriend must be a tolerant girl to bear him being a feminist.
I can't tell if the three are in character or not, just read the 1st chap.

Oh another cliff hanger XD
Please update soon, i'm dying for more XDD