Hello, I speak Spanish, hence I sorry for my bad english.
I read this story yesterday and I like ask you a favor.
I like translate the story to Spanish
I will say that you made history. I just want to translate.
!Ah! Love this story. I love Haloweentown. And I love Ethan Dalloway more. I mean, Lucas Grabeel, the actor.
I wrote one story about Ethan and Marnie. In Spanis of course.
!Well, goodbye!

aw

That was so cute! I love Ethan

write more!

i like this ending better!

Aww, this is amazing! Marnie/Ethan is such a good pairing.

Thank you. I was wondering on what could happen with this. And I love your version of ending so much better, it is now the official ending in my mind thank yee.

love it! continue please?

I really like this story, it gives the whole plot line a little twist when Ethan gets magic again. The only thing I found it lacked was a little bit of detail. What were Ethan and Marnie doing while they walked? Where did they part ways? Little things like that that draw the reader into the story. Overall it's a great begining.