great story

A perfect little vignette that I can easily see as being slipped in at the end of “Doomsday” and seeming as if it belonged there, a glimpse of things to come.

“He would get up, she'd dust him off, and they would right all that was wrong.” That’s exactly how I see the dynamics of their relationship and you captured it perfectly.

Great Job!

Beautiful fic. Loved it. Can't wait for more.

I think you did a fantastic job with this oneshot. I really enjoyed the emotional ties that seemed to blossom between the two.

Amazing!