awe this was so sweet. i loved when hunter felt like he was being watched and he woke up to his kids waiting for him to wake up and his reaction to what they said. loved it.

Uh... just so you know, Cam's family is Japanese... which would make a lot more sense in a ninja academy than Cantonese which is a variation of the Chinese language. But other than that little tidbit, I liked how you portrayed then as a family. :)

I love that you're writing again. This was so adorable. If only they could really live in this perfect world you created.

*Giggles* Wicked fic. Loved it.

Aww, what a nice 'perfectly normal weekend' story!! I really enjoyed it, because that's pretty much how my weekend went so far - if you substitute the "secret ninja academy visit" part with Wal-Mart ;)
Very nice work!!