Just have to say that your end A/N's are just as hot as your chap(s)! I want to slow down because only 2 more then I have to wait for an update, but I can't stop...

Although this Darkward is certainly no prince, Bella should really rethink her engagement to a man who treats her like Mike did. Even being this dark and creeperish, Edward's sadness still breaks my heart.

The descriptions and metaphors are astounding! Bella wants to be strong against Edward, but can't... Bella wants to resist Mercury, but can't.

I am already fascinated by this Edward. He hasn't seen her for 6 yrs (since sexing her bf) and he has the audacity to roar profanity at her upon seeing her engagement ring? Can't wait to get deeper...

This story is sucking me in...

I am enjoying your 3rd person perspective. Gotta read on.

This is the most evil fucked up Edward I have read. It's creepy hot. It's wrong, so wrong but I can't stop reading.

WOW.

I am in LOVE with this edward. he may be a prick but it is incredibly sexy. i'm a total fan of the protective/possessive guys and this is just doing wonders.

I love the third person as well and think it flows quite nicely.

I'm extremely extremely extremely excited to see what happens and hope you update soon again!

love it :)

Okay so I am TOTALLY NOT a fan of 3rd person. I have tried and failed many times before to read any story this way and always end up not reading it.

BUT...this one did it for me. I love it! It really flows and I didn't stop reading until there was no more to read.

Edward seriously posessive and demanding. And the mind reading to take over Bella. Wow. He's creepy HOT. LOL ( if there is such a thing)!

Wow, this is really a dark Edward. I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update.

just added this story- very interested in any changes edward might go through- i like this edward very much, but that swedish proverb from chapter 6 is intriguing.

thanks for this story- can't wait for more.

Damn. This Edward is so fuckhot. He's a complete asshole, but still just so damn fuckable.

I don't like how he was stringing her along when they were kids, but I'm hoping he has some damn good reasons for this, although I really can't come up with anything that would make this ok.

There is something about this possessive and seductive Edward that I like very much. Can't wait for the next update.

So your girl Bookbag pimped you out nicely on IMDB so thank her again for letting me get to read this goodness! Really, I'm loving your writing style, I have to get used to some of your terms, being your Australian right? But Hey, I love me some Aussies!

Anyhoo, This is unique and I heart it. I like that fact that finally Edward can read Bella's thoughts and be human doing it. He pains me with his posessiveness but I can't wait to dive into the real cause and what fuels him. Bella is strong in my opinion, she is fighting him but if I were in the same position I might cave too.

Your Edward is hot, you can't beat that.

GO WRITE! I will read:) I will also pimp you out. I like this that much. I write my own fic and I would love to rec you in A/N's if you let me, so please let me know if that is ok.

Larin

just started this and very intrigued...

Your story is totally compelling. I particularly enjoyed this last chapter with Rosalie and Emmett in the mix. And your Edward likes LZeppelin. What more can I say!

He really is one of the hottest Edwards! No contest. Please keep writing!

O, just found this. So original. Love it! I just have to know if Edward can only hear Bella though? He does seem a little psychotic though...sorry...

Can't wait for more! :)

This is a fantastic story ... but by gosh, Edward better have some redeeming emotional epiphany!