I really liked this one. I'm a Jibbs shipper too lol. I think that they should of gotten together in this show too. Maybe it's just the way that Mark and Lauren play their characters but their characters always seem to suit each other. I like the way that you wrote this. I think that the Jeremy/Jack pairing would be interesting if it did happen. You've inspired me to write a little one-shot about them. I hope you write more of this pairing soon.

Yay someone wrote what I was thinking! I'd been tempted to write something myself but I wasn't sure of anyone would read. I like it but I got the opposite impression of their failed date, that he took it too far and she said no.

I can see the Jibbs influences here, I think you made Jeremy stronger in this than she actually appeared to be in the show. She was really easily over emotional and made snap decisions based on her emotions, for example when she said she was going to quit and go to County. You've written her with an assertive edge I don't think she posessed - but Jenny did.

I like the plot and how you wrote Jack, my tip would be to make Jeremy more over dramatic and more childish with her reactions if you write again - and I hope you do, I don't mean to put you off. I think you got Jack spot on.