Whoa, that was an intense story. Very intriguing to read.

I think coming into the possession of the family grimoire wouldn't have changed a 13-year-old Harry to think and act so maturely, but overall the changes you made to the canon storyline were very interesting to read, completely new twists that I've never read before. Harry is so much more ruthless in your story, and it's very gratifying to see him be effective.

The shopkeeper was another interesting element of the story. I liked how he was motivated to do good, yet he was also 'evil' to some extent. It was a great touch to have him remember and yet forget; it makes his character realistic in that even though Harry's story is significant to the reader, it is not necessarily significant to the shopkeeper to whom it was just one manifest entry.

Thanks for writing!

Oh wow! that was AWESOME I loved it, hehehe, but you got to wonder why he didn't learn you said that was his 3rd punishment...YIKES!

THANKS:"D

Very delicious story. Creative and interesting!

An amazing story.

Thank you for sharing.

Annara

What aninteresting story. Very nicely told.

Very good story, too bad it was only one chapter, but it was very entertaining. Great job

Very good this! Love the end as well!

Now that, except for the rape of Hermione and the death of her unborn, was a Hell of a story. I wish you would add to this, maybe heal Hermione and let her and Harry get together.
C'mon, be a sport!

A most enjoyable read.

An interesting tale. Terrible thing that happened to Hermione, though.

wow interesting! awesome!

Wonderful story, I loved it. Great work.

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A really great story. Thanks for sharing!

Great story. It held interesting twists and turns, leading your readers on a wild path, one that I'd say they all loved. Thanks for the story!

Very interesting. A unique and intriguing story. I enjoyed reading it!