sorry, I didn't like it...

It seemed out of character of phoenix to be so cruel to edgeworth. all this "telling the truth is better than an attractive lie" didn't fly with me. Edgeworth and Phoenix are connected, they have been since that day in the classroom. To see a fic that ends their relationship even as friends is crushing. I know things change over 7 years, but consider that after how many years since the classroom incident Phoenix and Edgeworth reconnected? Time seems like a pretty inconsequential factor for these guys.

it's not that you're a bad author. you had good pace, flow, good dialouge... and it was well written. I just really disliked the concept. but then again i don't normally read stories with tragic endings. if i wanted that i have real life. i don't really need to be reminded that life sucks and is unfair in fanfiction or literature =/

sorry... nothing against you as an author.

Ah, my heart, you killed it! Things like this are always the saddest thing to me. That "I don't think I was ever really in love with you" thing, it always, kills me. This was no exception. God, I think you nerly made me cry! Ahh, I hate it, but Ilove it! That last line was tragically wonderful.

Damn, you're good at keeping characters in character! Their behavior was totally plausible. Which is something I love reading.

Thanks for a good story!

I love beautiful tragedies. Or is this really a tragedy? Heh.
Even though the ending is a bit disappointing, I must say, if it did end happily, then the happy ending itself will entirely eclipse the deep meaning in this story.
I love the contrast between these two characters. One blinded by the past, one looking forward to the future. One defining stability through finances. And the other defining it through situation. One honest. One lying.
It's so ironic. And kind of sick. But I'm really loving this irony, this sickness.

Thank you for such a great eye-opener!

Perfect. That's all I have to say.

That was... incredible. I'm really, really speechless! :O
Hm, let's try to explain what I'm thinking...
When I first saw hobo Phoenix, I just thought, "God, he's just not the same!" and not in a bad or good way.
And then I thought about Edgeworth. How would he react to this new Feenie? It wouldn't be the same, would it? And Edgeworth must've changed as well.
And then, I read your fanfiction and it is really what I was thinking -- hobo Phoenix would be seeing things differently. Since Edgeworth probably did not have any radical changes on his life, he didn't change so much.
But really, that was amazing! I could feel Edgeworth's pain, and I don't know how I would endure walking beside Phoenix and be so near and at the same time so far away...
Great job! :)

As much as I would like to complain about how they should be together, your fic was amazing and has left me speechless. Perfectly in character. Bravo! :)

aw poor edgeworth! his love was denied.

Wow, very good story, althought so sad... It breaks my heart to see Miles that way, but it´s the most probable thing that might happen if really there was something between them.
You are a great writer, I´ll read your other stories!

this is brilliant...i mean, it is really touching. it almost make me cry and i was sad the whole day after i've read this :D
i think phoenix and miles are just meant to be, and it makes me sad that phoenix doesnt like miles back in that way.
i think it's more realistic like this, though. it would be kinda strange if they just kiss and live together happily after all those years. (it would be so great, though v.v i was planning to write something like this xD)
you're not going to write a sequel, are you?