Just. Awesome.

Wow! Im stunned! (oh by the way I follow you on twitter Thania2 :) )

Poor Nessie. Its nice to see different sides of the story is the situation changed. Its really good :)

You're really talented :)

Well, that was sad.

I can't imagine the Cullens leaving Renesmee alone, not even Jake. But I guess Edward would hate himself so much that he wouldn't be a good father for Nessie.

Speechless is a good description of how I feel after this story...it was definitely awesome. So sad. :*( But definitely great!

Heart searingly beautiful. My tears are still falling.

Pam

oh, lovely. just taking a little break (well, a prerest, i suppose since i haven't actually STARTED studying) and decided to read one of your stories, and decided on this lovely oneshot. and it was. REALLY. good. i loved how it kept you guessing? like, how you would thing one thing about something, and then you would read on a little, and your perception on that certain situation would change because of certain word or sentences. very, very well done. i like how edward was shown, you don't see it often, the detached father figure (at least i haven't, in the way you write him), almost devoid of those trademark characteristics we have come to know vert well, how he isn't a main part of the story, not even there to fix a problem, or to solve anything, how he just passed by.

all in all, beautiful.

I feel like crying now. But damn, that was a amazing one-shot.

It really was. Poor Renesmee. You would think that she would have more strength, since she was half/half, but she was only six.

I guess she didn't know.

Thanks for writing this. It was freaking amazing. D

IChimpz

This is incredibly sad, incredibly moving, and in a way, incredibly wonderful. Congratulations, you have written an awesome fanfiction!

I tend to avoid all stories involving Renesmee, but this story was really good! Maybe one day you could make this into a longer story? I would for sure, definitely read it :)

Like the other readers have said too, this made me teary.

This is a fucktabulous one-shot.

I think I even said that in the judging comment.

Very insightful, full of depth, and hell, I loved it.

I'm such a sap. :)

But because it deserves lots of love, I'm gonna give it as long of a review as I feel!

Or my fingers. Whatever.

I love the end. It's spellbinding, and haunting.

And it's AMAAZING.

Seriously.

Amazing.

I love it. I love it. I love it.

And letting her get raped? Cruel. And neccesary.

And the interaction between emo Edward... just amazing.

Loved it Zombies Run This Town.

And I shall read and review more of your work. D

(Favorited.)

Loved it. D Even though I actually read this last night. )

Words can't describe how great this one-shot it. Very emotional. I love your writing style

WOW

very awesome. Completely fucked up. But awesome. I always wonder what it would be like it Edward hadn't been able to save her. And I like that Ness is both strong and very very human, or in need of support too.

SEZ-tastic!

aww this is so sad. It made me cry (Tear). I'm not lying

wow. this was amazing...

love love love it!

(sorry this review is short... i'm kind of speechless...)

the nessie/ edward moment was fantastically written, it brought me to tears (in a good,'i'm sad because you made me feel sad' way)

awesome!

olivia