Excellent! Though maybe I'd have switched Tea with Orihime. Heaven forbid she's not as clueless as she is.

Ugh! God Damn You Irony! LOl! Nice one man, keep it up.

lol usaul awesome

like I said on DA aniki, Malfoy's an ego stroker as ever in this story, humor really got me laughing a few times too. anyways, continue the story aniki. Ja Ne

its like JD can't get a break from the 'girl names' these days.

This is looking pretty good so far. This anime is getting more known in this section I think. Continue soon and don't give up.

I'm also working on a story that I've taken a lot of notes for. This idea is going to be a good one. Check it out sometime when you have time.

Lol neverending ab joke

Pretty cool that you got this chapter done. And Gaston is always going to be remember in this for the abs jokes and the chest hair.

Sweet chapter, dude! Though next time, space out the lines of dialogue so there's no confusion, okay? ^^; Other than that it was awesome!

Keep it up!

really cool for the fight scenes and even with the abrigded series references too, amyways, can't wait to see Gaston get killed and all, continue the stroy aniki
Ja Ne

King: O my God, Clayton shot Steve!

Baron: That jackass!

Me: Don't worry guys, I'm not really dead. Otherwise the story couldn't go on with out the character who is play Suzaku. Anyway great job Dave, and I thought the ending was kinda funny. Keep it up.

Well that certainly was an interesting take on the episode! Awesome as always, and now, i want to see the abridged series

I'll try to get my bio up, and i'm really sorry for not interacting much!

Keep on kicking **

Nukid

A technicality here but... the Zaku II is not really a Gundam, but part of the broader class called "Mobile Suit"... neither was the ZAKU (you should really specify what version the Zaku is, as those that know their Gundam Lore might miscommunicate a bit)

Otherwise, good start, but becides Lelouch, Rivalz and Kallen, can't tell who's replacing who.

And so chap 1 has arrived!

Da Zakus rule!

at least it wasn't the banana phone song as the ring tone