hey hey! really good job on this! Keep going, it's really interesting

Wow, that was great! Why not continue? ;-)

I really enjoyed this! First time I read John/Gabriel and how they got in bed together was quite believable.

I quite liked this, particularly the Gabriel/John action (big fan of Female!Gabriel/John)

this was artwork-
i loved the drabble style, and the gabriel part was amazingly funny. great work.

Hey, great story. Nice characterization. Hope to see more from you.