Nice little story with just a bit of Colby whumping. Hope things go better for you soon.

very good story

favorite line the whole story What has he got that I haven’t?Friends with guns

great line great job

LOVE this! Great start. Please update soon.

Hepax.

Hey girl, I'm really proud of you. I notice that you

have only one previous review so a lot of people are

certainly missing out on a clever and fun filled story.

This story was just great. Only one negative comment.

I much prefer my Colby stories not to end with a

commitment. Saying he loved Teen means I'm left out

in the cold. LOL Just kidding . . .

I do prefer though that Colby remain a footloose and

fancy free bachelor.

My compliments on your very first fanfic. I'm so glad

you came into the Numb3rs world with your lovely ficlets.

great start. can't wait for more